Chapter 55:

The study door was closed, but there was no anti-locking, because Qi Qi was free to move when trying to pull the door handle.
There was no sound in it.
"... Shen Yan?" His inquiry was the same as tapping twice on the door panel, cautiously and patiently.
"... um." The answer was lighter than the question itself.
Qi Xiao quickly and carefully opened the door, and the lights in the room did not know when it went out. Only the cold white light of the computer screen was printed on the wall. Even if only the light source is left, Shen Yan buried his head in his hands as if fearing the light, sitting down stiffly like a rock, and his chair turned away from the screen.
Qi Chen seemed to realize something, hurried to him, hurriedly holding his shoulder and asked in a low voice: "Are you all right?"
"It's okay," he drew closer, and then he heard the slight hoarseness in Shen Yan's voice. It should have not fully recovered from the choked throat just now, but at least they can have a normal conversation. Can't get it back. Sorry, give me a little more time. "
Is that true? Qi Xi frowned.
In fact, I also guessed that Shen Yan probably entered the role too deeply, and it will take some time to calm down. But now he can speak out himself, proving that his consciousness is sober and is adjusting himself. Qi Qi was relieved instead.
"Take your time, I set up a recording for the game for you, it is being recorded, and you can listen back later."
Although I'm sorry for the last two players who played, but now, besides accompanying Shen Yan, he has no extra thoughts on other things.
"Come on, give me your hand."
Qi Chen first moved the headphones aside for Shen Yan, then gently touched the hands that were covering her head, and tried to break apart. Shen Yan's shoulders trembled slightly, his spine gradually straightened, and he raised his head, following his movements very obediently and put his hands down. Qi Qi didn't urge, and waited patiently until his face was completely separated from his palm, before slowly holding his hand.
Shen Yan's palm was a little wet.
Of course Qi Qi knew what it was, so she didn't ask or wipe it for him, but she silently stuck to her head with her hands and returned to the area, firmly pressing the person in front of her into her arms.
At the beginning, Shen Yan didn't respond quietly, leaning weakly on his chest. After a long while, his hands slowly touched his waist and hugged him silently.
Qi Zi couldn't help laughing, patting him gently like a child, comforting him with his hands and mouth.
"You are well matched, everyone is moved."
"Is it ..." Shen Yan muttered to himself, it seemed that he did not see the enthusiastic response from the audience on the public screen.
Qi Chen was stunned and couldn't help laughing: "Why, don't you turn around and don't look at the screen after finishing?"
Unexpectedly, Shen Yan's answer surprised him: "I didn't look at the screen from the beginning. The whole process was turned away from the computer. I just listened to the host's instructions step by step."
"You said you haven't looked at the screen since the beginning?" Qi Q couldn't believe it again.
"Ok……"
"What about that line?" The character line for the preliminary contest was officially announced temporarily, and was only posted on the announcement.
"I read it when the line just came out, and then the players who played before me kept repeating it, and after hearing it many times, I naturally remembered it." Shen Yan took a slow breath in his arms, his hands from He loosened his waist and straightened up, frowning and rubbing his face, as if he had calmed down.
Qi Qi looked down at his face. Fortunately, it is not particularly pale, but it looks tired.
"You ... still have no way to dub while looking at the audience below?" It's no wonder that when more than 10,000 strangers are on the scene, most people will be stiff, not to mention Shen Yan. If that kind of huge psychological pressure is not in person or in person, you will never feel it.
"Just finish it." Shen Yan whispered, still did not mean to look at the screen.
Qi Qi heard this sentence and suddenly wanted to say something, but she didn't know how to speak. She could only stare at Shen Yan silently until the dynamics on the screen pulled his attention back.
At this time, the last player seems to be off, and official staff are counting the final total score and ranking.
Next, it was Pu Yuzhi's turn to comment on the performance of the players one by one-Qi Qi thought of this, and suddenly patted Shen Yan on the shoulder, and then waited for the other party's reaction. It is the external mode.
The bright and sweet Yujie sound of Yang Chunqu sounded again.
"Dear listeners, players, the second bill of the preliminary round tonight's dubbing trial, Xiao Shan Lao's finally entered the final stage after more than an hour of exciting competition! I believe you have been looking forward to this moment for a long time-yes, below we have please The judges of this field, teacher Pu Yuzhipu commented on the game just now! Welcome! "
There was cheering on the public screen, brushing Pu Yuzhi's name to help.
Pu Yuzhi's red waistcoat boarded Mai Xu, first cleared his throat, or habitually said "Classmates are good", causing the audience to burst into laughter.
Unlike the official longbow with a gentle and gentle style, she did not speak any polite words, she was straightforward, and quite a professor who started to talk happily after opening the lecture in the class: "I know that many people disagree with the score I scored. Ask me why I give some people low scores and some people give high scores. Do n’t worry, let ’s start with the characters themselves-please ask the host to repost the character settings of 'Xiaoshan Old Man'. "
Yang Chunqu heard that, and really changed the content of the announcement, adding the official character set previously announced.
"Okay, as you can see, the character" Xiao Shan Lao Sou "is an old man in his 60s or 70s, and he is the head of the team. He treats his apprentices as" generally loves his children ". "" Pu Yuzhi read out according to the passage. She is a professional lecturer in broadcasting and hosting. She usually speaks very powerfully and makes people involuntarily raise the spirit to listen. "Generally speaking, according to the regular commercial dubbing, the dubbers must first understand the original work before dubbing. There are books and videos. The content depends on the content, and the preparation is complete before you start. Have you worked hard in this regard, the insiders can hear it as soon as they hear it. "
Qi Xiao was ashamed of hearing this.
When Shen Yan proposed to read the original work, he also felt that Shen Yan was too serious and felt that as long as there were official character settings, it was more than enough.
But Pu Yuzhi's words made him feel that he did not do enough, because the original description of the characters is more comprehensive and more three-dimensional, and it is not a few simple character introductions that can be replaced. Especially after listening to Shen Yan's Xiaoshan old man, this kind of cognition is even stronger.
You must find time yourself, study the original work, and try your best to cope with the next game.
Pu Yuzhi's following words slightly relieved his sense of guilt: "But considering that most people are amateur dubbing enthusiasts, and it is not easy to read a half a million words. So, let's take a step back Say, should you read the official character set carefully? "
Qi Qi nodded, but he had read it seriously.
"If you look at the role of this person, you can also roughly analyze the key points to be expressed: first, the sense of age, I know that most players are young guys, it is more difficult to match the old man, this is more restrictive; second, Identity, this person is not the old man passing by the street casually, nor is it an ordinary peasant, woodman, fisherman or the like, but a master, who must have the momentum and temperament. "Pu Yuzhi does not Analyze one by one, "The third, and the most important feature is the lover like a son. Please listen to my comments later, remember the above three points firmly."
At this time, there were a few clattering sounds like paper turning at the end of the network cable. It should be something Pu Yuzhi was watching. It is estimated that she and Shen Yan both record the performance of the players while listening.
"So let's start with player 1. Player 1 ..."
She commented one by one according to the number. The comment style was similar to Qi Qi's expectations. It was not as gentle as a longbow, poisonous and sharp, and the words were bloody, but the relative ones also benefited a lot. If the audience asks questions on the public screen while she is speaking, she will stop and explain why she evaluates so slowly until everyone is convinced to take the oral.
-Worthy of being a famous teacher.
Qi Qi looked down at Shen Yan slightly at this time.
Shen Yan is still sitting quietly. The dedicated attitude is familiar to him. He knows that Shen Yan is listening carefully, but he still hasn't turned back to face the screen.
"Here is player 19." When Pu Yuzhi reported the number of the bombardment, the little fans who had been upset finally waited until the outbreak moment, and then grumbled on the public screen to complain about the judges' pressure and caused their idols. Ranked second again.
Pu Yuzhi did not respond to this, but began to evaluate his comprehensive performance one by one.
"First of all, I must say that this player's sense of age is slightly better than everyone else in the front. The grandpa's voice is very accurate. I can see that I usually worked hard to practice, which is good."
Suddenly, there is a classic turning point.
"However, the sense of age is only one of the criteria used to measure the sound line is inappropriate. In addition, the characteristics of the character must also be considered. The characteristic of this character is that it is calm and respectable. The sound of No. 19 Rising up ... It is not so much a leader in the mountains that lives in the world, it is better to be a martial arts leader who often gives orders. The momentum is enough, but there is a feeling of floating, outgoing and restrained insufficient."
So she gave 3.5 points, meaning that she was generally satisfied, but her temperament was different.
"In terms of pronunciation, this player's skill is also better than many people before. It should be well practiced. The vocabulary is very clear and the standard of Mandarin. And some lines will find a pause for themselves. It can be seen that there is a sense of rhythm in the voiceover. I believe everyone can hear these good places. "Pu Yuzhi's approach has always been exaggerated, and the same will not be missed. The same is true of the poisonous tongue." But unfortunately, the "basic points" and 'Infectiousness' is disappointing. "
As soon as the words came out, the public screen immediately exploded.
Fans attacked in unison, clamoring for Uncle Gun.
Listener 1: My family's Uncle Gun is clearly a wonderful match, I think it is very contagious! Why give 1.0 points! Why say "regrets"! Very hurt, okay! Is n’t the person who is a teacher mainly to encourage students!
Audiencer 2: I do n’t understand. While saying what most people are amateur dubbing can be considerate, while using this professional rack to evaluate players, dare to be more double-sided? ? (︶︿︶) = convex
Audience 3: Strongly request a comment from another person! ! Who commented badly and asked to come up with the lowest score? Isn't this a clear picture of bullying us? ?
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Pu Yuzhi was silent for about three seconds, and suddenly said: "Many people don't like to listen to critical opinions. This is normal. I will feel uncomfortable when I eat bitter things. This is a person's instinct. In this special case of the competition, there are more opportunities for criticism than usual, from the judges, from the audience, and from the opponents. "
The scene calmed down a little, and she continued very calmly.
"Criticism, listen to it-but not all kinds of criticism have to be listened to, and criticism is divided into benign and malignant. Some people, he listens to benign and malignant, he listens to it and he goes to his heart, and when he is hit, he retracts it. , It ’s called inferiority; some people do n’t listen to both, and continue to do their own thing. This kind of talk is self-confident and self-confessed. It ’s my personal point of view to distinguish rationally, accept benign criticism, and ignore vicious criticism-this , I think it is self-encouragement. "
The last sentence is the point.
"I can say very modestly that my criticisms are all benign. As for those who are too low self-esteem and too conceited, it is probably useless to argue that these are benign criticisms. You can choose not to listen. On the contrary, rational people welcome to stay under."
A slap hits loudly, and the evil words on the public screen are indeed much cleaner.
If it is not because you are not your own account in front of you, and you are not suitable to publish public opinions as a cv, Qi Zhen really has the urge to line up on the public screen and shout "teacher Pu v5".
"Then I will continue to talk about No. 19." Pu Yuzhi calmly continued the topic just now, "Qin Tuo, who has been in the first act for a long time, came back. There was not much emotional change between Master's few sentences, and there was a tone from beginning to end. The emotions of surprise and kindness did not stand out, giving people a feeling that the apprentices actually go home every day, there is nothing special. It is estimated that because of the need to control the sense of age, the light pressure sounds, and the tone is not taken into account-this is a lot A common problem with the voice system. "
The sound of the skyrocketing stand out against the many players in front, it can be said that the opening was amazing, which is a benefit.
The disadvantage is that the primary and the secondary are reversed, excessively pursuing the sense of age and ignoring the more critical tone fluctuations and emotional expressions-Qi Qi didn't pay attention to it at the time, and now I realized it after listening to Pu Yuzhi's analysis.
"From the second act, this character began to have a deviation in understanding, and it was quite a deviation." Pu Yuzhi turned the page again and again. It seems that she recorded very detailed records at the time and wrote a lot of words, "To be honest, I think the official tone labeling is a bit too simple, but it also has a simple truth. The focus is on examining whether the players are carefully looking at the settings and whether they are thinking about the logic of tone from the standpoint of the role. "
"The first impression I gave on the 19th was that this master had a strong bias towards his apprentices. He indulged Qin Tuo, despised Bai Ke, and even used the young apprentice to teach the young apprentice everywhere. Imagine how a person who loves his apprentice very much Do something that hurts the other party ’s self-esteem? Comparing the heart, as a mother, what I want most to see is that my children get along with each other in harmony and harmony, rather than seeing them scramble for a broken relationship. Not to mention From the perspective of a master, such favoritism is also not allowed. If he is unfair to his juniors, how can he be admired? How can he maintain his sect? "
"If everyone reads the original book, it will be found that Bai Ke is actually a person with an inferiority complex, and a master who understands his personality defect is even less likely to deliberately apply salt to the wound. This is a big mistake, this scene It was wrong from the beginning, so it became more and more wrong later. "
She pointed out the fatal wound of the bombardment, that is, the interpretation of Xiaoshan ’s mentality towards Bai Ke.
Whether it is the second or third act, his interpretation seriously violates the original portrayal.
"The last episode was the main reason why I played 1.0. I personally think that the episode is very important. It is one of the most sensational scenes. It is the main point to mobilize the emotions of the audience. As mentioned earlier, the feeling of No. 19 is ... Qin Tuo was a real apprentice who pulled him up from a young age. Bai Ke only received it halfway, but anyone who has read the original book knows that it is actually the opposite. The word 'Master' has both a teacher and a father. The performance on the 19th is only that of Master Yan. Dear Father, there is such a misfortune to teach a wicked traitor that he would like to be beaten to death with his own hands. "
Pu Yuzhi's voice fell deeper, and his tone was more severe than before: "There is another key message-Bai Ke was already dead at that time. For an old man who has been in a flower armor, the most painful thing is that the white hair sent Dark-haired people, seeing the children raised by their hands turned into a box of ashes, even if the other party's sins are deep and serious, they have been angry, and they will not be indifferent to the children who are dead and can't be raised, nor will they be like the 19th. Showing cold blood. "
Why it is so low is already clear.
This time, even the fans who were so stunned became dumb one by one, as if they disappeared completely on the screen, without a trace.
Reviews continue.
When Pu Yuzhi was about to evaluate the performance of player 27, Shen Yan, who had been silent until then, suddenly asked in a very low voice: "How many points did they ... give me? Can they advance?"
It sounds a bit hesitant.
Qi Qi couldn't help but looked at him with his eyes wide open: "Did you take off your headphones without even listening to your total score?"
Shen Yan sighed depressively: "Sorry, I'm a little afraid ... I'm afraid the result will disappoint you."
If you know that the first place in the total score says so, I do n’t know how many players will be stunned-Qi Qi is very angry and funny, but all kinds of emotions are intertwined, but the final victory is a slight pain, falling In the bottom of my heart, it also fell on the finger that touched Shen Yan's cheek: "You, you should give yourself a little more confidence."
Lowering his head, he kissed Shen Yan's forehead with some pity, gently touching the face, and decided to say what he had buried for a long time.
"Actually, I still want to say to you—"
At this time, Pu Yuzhi's words interrupted Qi Qi: "Below, I will comment on No. 28, which is the only player I have scored all four points since the start of the game."
Shen Yan shivered slightly when she heard the words "all scored four quarters" and raised her head in confusion.
Facing Qi Xiao's faint smile.
"You listen," he said, "now, do you know your score?"
"No. 28's voice is actually not obvious and belongs to a relatively unrecognizable type, but it sounds a very calm and correct impression. This impression has not changed even in the state of pseudo-grandpa, This is very rare among voice-changing players. "
Pu Yuzhi rarely smiled slightly during the review.
"Dubbing, the emphasis is on the word" dubbing. "This is very different from the stage performance, and considering that it is a game, the players see the characters in the game. The sound is based on the fit of the character. The voice actor also has to hide himself to the greatest extent possible, so that the person who hears the sound enters the play rather than plays it-from this point, it is actually a good thing that the sound characteristics are not obvious. "
The sound of any work that matches the picture must conform to the picture, otherwise it will be out of tune and people will not hear it.
This is the biggest difference between film, TV and game dubbing and traditional radio dramas.
"Your voice on the 28th is relatively simple and gentle, which makes me think that I can imagine an old man hiding in the mountains, idle in the clouds and wild cranes, indifferent to fame and fortune. This is one of the characteristics of Xiaoshan old man. There will be no abrupt feeling when he assumes the role And, you can make the sound sound natural, unlike many young people who pretend to be sixty or seventy years old, they will have a rigid sense of speaking with their noses, very good. "
"What's even more rare is that while you control your voice steadily, you can also adjust your tone according to the change of the character's position when you speak. This is what many people often forget. For example, in the first act, you I personally feel that the transition from the master to the master and then to an old father who is eagerly expecting the child to go home. The punctuation marks in the official lines are for reference only, some players take care of them, without considering the speaker The environment and atmosphere at the time, but I feel you have taken it into consideration. "
Next, she gave an example of what it meant to be a line into the environment.
"Everyone close their eyes and think about it. At midnight, Xiaoshan suddenly found someone outside the door and further contacted the original background. At that time, it was a period of turbulence in the rivers and lakes. The court sent people to arrest people from the lake and the lake as palms. The doormen ’s first reaction was that it was normal to be alert. But at this time, he suddenly discovered that his little apprentice was back safely. His identity changed, and his emotions must of course also change, especially the last sentence, which seemed to be complaining. I can hear strong love ... This is our nagging old man who is always looking forward to the return of his children. When he really comes back, he ca n’t help but contradict the two sentences.
"Whether this sentence is a pause in the sentence, whether the lines are high or low, or a small gasp you add, you will experience a kind of tangled flow in the process of listening."
Qi Qi heard this, the corner of her mouth could not help but gently raised.
Yes, this was the feeling he used to play with Shen Yan. It seemed that in the scene, the other party's dynamics and looks were clear, and he could respond reasonably according to this sense of picture.
"The next thing is to talk about your sense of dialogue. I have n’t mentioned this very much because there are not many people who can show the sense of dialogue among the players. The so-called sense of dialogue refers to who notices who he is talking to during the dubbing process. Considering the tone according to the object, it makes people feel that even if there is no opponent, there seems to be a person like that. "Since Shen Yan shows something that has not been mentioned before, Pu Yuzhi certainly does not mind giving it to everyone. "In the process of speaking, I feel that your old man Xiaoshan is thinking about the mood of the opponent's drama while talking, and from your tone, you can guess what kind of personality the other person is."
"The most obvious should be the dialogue between Act 2 and Bai Ke. Many people don't seem to know that Bai Ke's inferiority complex is suspicious, especially when it is used to compare with his peers. So I hear your treatment, there is a kind of immediate As soon as she lit up, she thought, "Oh, some people will pay attention to Bai Ke's feelings."
"The better place is the pause after the phrase" Your brother ". Several players in the past also paused in that place, but many people just spoke slowly and did not pay attention to lower the tone. Listen to your voice. At that time, I felt that I could even see Bai Ke standing opposite, and heard Master mentioning the picture of Master ’s face changing. Your tone of voice sounded like it was because of seeing him with a bad complexion and feeling guilty. The way to finish talking. And Qin Tuo ’s treatment of raising first and then suppressing is right. Generally speaking, first blame the little apprentice, let the apprentice feel a little more comfortable after listening, and then mention that the little apprentice is worth his study In this way, he is more receptive. As for a loving father who shows up later, he is worried about the feeling of the child who is about to go down the mountain ... Needless to say, I believe everyone can hear it. "
Pu Yuzhi said a long paragraph, and began to turn the page again and again, and it was very clear and beautiful in Qi Po's ears.
She turned and murmured to herself: "For player 28, it is actually very difficult to imitate the voice, or just the pronunciation, basic points, appeal, etc., as other people have done, because they have complemented each other and are missing one. No. I tend to comment together, so I'll say it right after another. "
As she said, then came the third act.
"The third act on the 28th is the most impressive of what I have heard in this game today-as for why I say this, I think everyone knows it, otherwise the on-site turnout will not exceed 90% . "
Pu Yuzhi truthfully expressed his thoughts. The response of the audience she had been silently watching, but only until now did she say it.
"A character must have feelings in order to survive. However, it is not enough to show such feelings. Whether it can reach the point where the audience resonates, determines the success or failure of this character. I have explained the" basic points "and the infection before. Some students do not understand the difference of "power". In fact, the "basic score" is to evaluate whether the player can express emotions. Of course, this expression of emotion may be correct or wrong. "Infectious power" refers to the correct On the basis of expressing feelings, have you listened to the listeners and shocked them? "
"The reason for the need for correct emotions is that it is in line with psychological logic. What is not logical cannot withstand scrutiny and will never impress everyone. But just being" correct "is not enough to impress others, and it needs" truth. "She Speak slowly, "Many people think that the voice is the most important in the dubbing process. This is true, but the blank is also very important. Before you start talking on the 28th, there is a long blank space. At the beginning, I also I thought it was a pause between the curtain and the transition of the curtain, but it was too long, and I suddenly realized that this was a painful mood that was expressing the character for a long time. When you started to say the first sentence, I Confirm this even more. "
"As for your tone, I have mentioned a lot, so I do n’t need to explain them one by one. The lines are the same for all players, and the tips are the same. See how you can change and join in. Your own characteristics make the lines full and not pale. These are all dependent on non-line words, such as onomatopoeia, laughter, crying, etc. "
"In the end, there was a slow shift from a bitter smile to a choking process, which was not mentioned in the script at all. It was not so prominent, because after adding these, it suddenly became very realistic. I have been a teacher for so many years It ’s basically pretending to be crying and crying when you hear it ... I think you ’re really choked up in the following paragraph. You know, it ’s great that the voice actor can enter the role in such a short voice acting time Things, you can imagine you figured out the character you want to match, experience the character's state of mind at that time, and understand his state of mind. These things can't be done without devoting yourself wholeheartedly-you have done it. "
"Shen Yan," Qi Qi attached to his ear and repeated lowly, "Shen Yan, you heard it. You did it ... really, not only did it but did it well."
Shen Yan's eyelids moved, and buried his head, his hands kept holding Qi Qi's clothes corner tightly.
Qi Qi put her hand on his broad back and gently supported it upwards: "Come, stand up."
In the dimly lit room, the light from the screen is particularly precious, but from the angle of Shen Yan, you can only see the black shadow cast by you-so Qi Qi wants him to turn back, no longer facing away from the light source, use His own eyes took a good look at what the audience said about him.
But before that, Qi Yu thought that Pu Yuzhi, who had finished the review, once again said amazingly: "Here, I will talk about why I deducted No. 28 player one point."
The author has something to say: _: з∠_I am back ...
Originally, this chapter should not have been published so late, because it suddenly disconnected from the Internet after writing ... disconnected. network. Too. And wait till now (kneeling)
The content of the comments in this chapter is really too long (and Mr. Pu actually has other things to say, but it can't be put down), just ... I hope that everyone will like to hear it. Sure enough, I am a serious person who writes reviews and writes explosive words ... tat