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Fury Ocean
- Noob With Old Gun
- 1165 characters
- 2021-03-01 12:06:35
One volume, and the volume is finished, old habits, some words are irritating to everyone. Bayi Chinese w net w one w small. Net 8 small 18 zw. Eight c net om
The first volume, strictly speaking, is not the story of the main character. Niuben is young and has little drama. Most of the content is occupied by supporting actors. I know that this is a taboo for web articles. The editor advised me before the book was opened. The so-called substitution, to put it plainly, is that the reader lives with the protagonist, sees what he sees, thinks about what he thinks, adventures, learns art, kills the enemy, blood, and so on.
Opening like this does not match the style of the web.
In addition, in the narrative style, the first volume is a multi-line depiction, and readers who are not used to the splicing of the picture are confused, saying that the tiredness is light, and they will say that they cannot understand, and then they will abandon the book.
The third point is that there is a huge gap between the prologue and the text, and the change in rhythm will affect the pleasure of reading. Also, it is difficult to write a few lively characters, and it will be written before long (I firmly believe that this is not Called death, but in that world, they are dead), this is abuse.
The above are all violations of web articles, which will cause readers to churn, will affect performance, affect income ... Regarding these, old readers should understand what I will say. Bayi Chinese W Bayi W. Eighteen nets in eighteen W in W. Chinese C O Network M
Yes, I know all of this, it's all my fault. I honestly admit the mistake but don't plan to change it, because this is my choice, my choice!
Personality is called style; bitter words are called persistence; hooligan words are called me like; alternative words are called ... whatever it is called.
Fortunately, this is the end. I hope that you who are lovely will look at me who are not so cute. At the beginning of the next chapter, Niu Niu will grow up and invite everyone to accompany him to conquer the world. I promise that I will follow the easy, pleasant and sour rhythm. Take everyone through the starry sky, that vast and future.
Having said that, I still have a little extra talk about the first volume. The entire volume of Nuhan's twelve to thirteen volumes (there is a natural reason for the unknown), the volume is the beginning, laying and background. After writing, look back, several goals at the beginning have been achieved, and the Not bad. For example, the preliminary depiction of the living world, the display of story elements, the portrayal of the protagonist and important supporting characters, as well as the style of writing, narrative methods, clues, and so on. Enrichment, of course, the most important is the style of writing and foreshadowing. The text of science fiction and Xianxia must be different, and the clues will also be different. Bayi Chinese w small w small w. Eighteen small one eighteen w. com
The above is just my job. It can be said or not. Good or bad can only be judged by everyone. I want to tell you that I have considered these aspects when writing this story, and I take it very seriously.
Ability is high or low, attitude is first, well, this is attitude.
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Let's talk about the content.
I believe most readers have already seen that Mei is the zero number. The origin of the zero number is a foreshadowing of the book. The volume already gives clues, and it is quite obvious. However, it should be noted that what is said here is obviously not how long the relevant space is, but the number of hints, which may be one or two sentences each time. Attentive friends can give it a try and you should know who she is.
2. The clues buried in the prologue and the text will be filled in the future, such as Yamamoto Yuichi, who will appear in the future and intersect with the protagonist; and "company", so to speak, although not as good as the umbrella company in the biochemical crisis, but It also belongs to an important force in this book. Others, such as Allen, the Kingdom of God Research Society, when No. 0 became the Mei girl, and why the cattle family arrived, these are pits that will be filled in the future.
Here I would like to remind you that Anhan is going to write several million words, instead of ending with three or five million words. So when something jumps out, please do n’t be too surprised. .
Everything is planned.
3. After counting, I now have more than 25 thousand characters in the first volume and 25 names! It is really not easy to draw so many people in this little text, and it is no wonder that the picture will appear scattered.
Don't think that I'm doing my meritorious deeds, as I said before, it's my fault if I have a defect, and it's also my fault if I'm unhappy, honestly.
What do you mean by that? I want to tell you that there will be more characters in the future. However, except for those relatively important roles, not every supporting role is selected in the outline, but I can't come up with a decent name, so if anyone is willing Help, if you choose a good name to choose for me, the old gun is greatly appreciated.
Fourth, the name of the protagonist, I really did not expect that this would become a mess. Isn't Niu Ben good? Do you have to take the name of the romantic Qiuyushu Linfeng, a pear tree and a begonia? And you see, Niu Ben, Niu Niu Niu Ni, and the name Nuhan is more suitable! By the way, the original name of this book was Nu Han, but it was occupied by people and changed its name to Nu Han.
Special thanks to "Fu Zuofeiweiwei", um, Aifei, the title of the book she helped me think about.
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Okay, all the important things have been finished. What I will talk about next is ... more important things.
As I said before, I don't think Nuhan is a transformational work, but it is indeed science fiction. The first time I wrote it, I needed to consult a lot of information, which was very tiring. For example, in the first volume, each chapter cannot be modified more than three times, and many of the direct manuscripts are rewritten, and the lost text is definitely more than what you see now.
Even so, mistakes are unavoidable, and there are no small disadvantages like this. So again, please forgive me. If you like it, ask for support. If you do n’t like it, wait until the next time you meet, and treat each other well.
Finally, I wish everyone a safe and happy ~ EbookFREE.me ~ happy.
Old gun.