Chapter 68: Revised text

　　 Wei Xingsi drags the mouse to read the summary part by sentence.
　　 After reading the first two sentences, he nodded and said:
　　 "Not bad, but the writing is fine."
　　 At the third sentence, he frowned, thought for a moment, and said:
　　 "Is it better to bring the latter part to the front?"
　　 "Well, indeed." Xu Qiu responded.
　　 Teacher Wei changed it and continued to look down.
　　 In the fourth sentence, he read it for a while and added an adjective to the sentence.
　　 The fifth sentence, no problem.
　　 At the sixth and seventh sentence, he frowned again and said:
　　 "These two sentences are not well connected, and there are logical gaps, don't you think?"
　　 Xu Qiu thought for a while and said:
"um, yes."
　　 It is true that the logic between these two sentences is a bit unsound, but he didn't know how to change it for a while.
　　 As he struggled, Teacher Wei began to type while saying:
　　 "Is it better to change this way."
　　 "Hmm."
　　 I have to say that after the change, I really read more fluently.
　　 Teacher Wei laughed at the last sentence and said:
　　" Look at the word used, can you use outstanding to describe your efficiency?
　　 Your efficiency is only 8%. When you use this term, others think you have achieved 11%, 12%, and you can use high here. "
　　 Xu Qiu also smiled awkwardly. He used this word in other people's articles.
　　 felt very domineering, so he used it directly, but he made a joke.
　　 The summary is only one paragraph, less than 200 words, but it was changed for nearly half an hour.
　　 Teacher Wei moved the page to the author of the paper and said:
　　 "You can change the questions I mentioned before, and let Feifei Wu read it after the changes, and I will add her name."
"Ok."
　　 He put Wu Feifei's name in the three works and said:
　　 "By the way, I have to draw a TOC, which is a summary of the picture version, and then give it a description within 60 words."
"Ok."
　　……
　　 The two returned to Room 216.
　　 "Senior sister, I know how your previous article has more than 40 versions." Xu Qiu said.
　　 "Yes, every time I show him, he always picks out a bunch of questions. I should be the best writer in the research group." Chen Wanqing said:
　　 "It is said that Duan Yun's article has more than 20 versions, and Wu Feifei's only has about 10. When I came to me, I directly changed it more than 40 times."
　　 "Maybe I have to change it more than 40 times. This time he singled out so many questions." Xu Qiu said.
　　 "These questions of yours are all minor problems. This is estimated to be similar to Feifei Wu's, and it won't be changed too many times." Chen Wanqing said:
　　 "I changed it so many times before because there were many grammatical problems, such as incorrect use of person, number and tense."
　　 "I hope I can get it right soon." Xu Qiu said:
　　 "By the way, how to draw TOC? And what about the description part later?"
"The TOC of this kind of short article does not need to be too exaggerated. Take the JV characteristic curve directly and put a picture in the blank space in the middle. Just use the tweezers to bend the substrate. Remember to make the TOC picture. It's square." Chen Wanqing said:
　　 "As for the following description, it is even simpler. In one word, we use PEN flexible substrate to prepare an inverted structure solar cell device, based on the photoelectric performance of the two benchmark systems are XX and YY, it is enough."
　　 "Senior elder sister is very good in the analysis," Xu Qiu said: "If the essay is written in Chinese, it is estimated that elder sister will not be so worried."
　　 "Yes, it is a disadvantage to do scientific research if English is not good enough." Chen Wanqing said.
　　……
　　 It took two hours, and Xu Qiu revised the article according to Teacher Wei’s advice.
　　 He glanced at the direction of the laboratory. Wu Feifei was doing an experiment, so it's not good to disturb her now.
　　 He had to find a few Wiely journals and check whether he had any other formatting problems.
　　 Unexpectedly, he really found some problems with the format of several references. It seems that the ENDNOTE software is still not smart enough and needs to be checked manually.
　　 Finally, Xu Qiu saw Wu Feifei coming out of the laboratory after finishing the experiment.
　　 was followed by Duan Yun. He was waving his arms and cheering: "Eating."
　　 So, it's already half past five.
　　 That can only be said after dinner.
　　…………
　　 After the four of them went to the cafeteria to have dinner, they all walked towards the first floor of the material.
　　 Xu Qiu was a little puzzled, because the graduate student’s dormitory is very close to the cafeteria, so the other three people usually go back to the dormitory to rest after eating, but they all chose to go back to the office.
　　 Go back to Room 216.
　　 Xu Qiu handed the U disk to Feifei Wu and said:
　　 "Senior Sister Feifei Wu, Teacher Wei has given you time to help read my article."
　　 "Okay," Wu Feifei took the U disk and directly copied the draft file to the desktop and opened it.
　　 "Watch now, don't you need to rest?" Xu Qiu said.
　　 "Tomorrow is the first group meeting at the beginning of school. I want to prepare the PPT. Let me take a moment to help you watch it," Wu Feifei said:
　　 "By the way, has Teacher Wei read it in detail?"
　　 "He mainly looked at the pictures, and carefully changed the summary part, and only looked at the format in other places." Xu Qiu said.
　　 "Okay, then I will mainly help you read the text. I don't know the specific experiment content, so I mainly look at the expression and format." Wu Feifei said.
　　 Twenty minutes later, Wu Feifei found Xu Qiu with the U disk and said:
　　"Xu Qiu, you have written this article very well. UU Reading www.uukanshu.com
　　 Basically, I don’t change it much. I have highlighted the areas that I think are problematic in yellow. You can refer to them. Not much, just five or six.
　　 It's easier to read your article than to read Chen Wanqing's.
　　 Hey, changing her article at that time made me very tired. "
　　 Chen Wanqing was sitting next to her. After she heard it, she wanted to refute it.
　　 But when I remembered that Wu Feifei helped her make changes all afternoon, she managed to make it better, so she bowed her head weakly without speaking.
　　 Xu Qiu referred to Wu Feifei’s opinions and iterated the article version to the third edition.
　　 In the evening, he and Chen Wanqing went to Teacher Wei with the latest version.
　　 "Have you seen Wu Feifei?"
"seen it already."
　　 "What did she say."
　　 "She said that her writing was pretty good, and she basically didn't need to change it. Then she picked a few expressions, and I changed everything according to her opinion."
　　 "Her evaluation is quite high, okay, let me see."
　　 Wei Xingsi clicked on the document, stayed for a long time on the title side, and said:
　　"Are you sure to use this title?
　　'The efficiency of organic photovoltaic devices based on PEN flexible substrates can reach 8%'. "
　　 Without waiting for Xu Qiu's reply, he said to himself:
　　 "It looks ok, then use this."
　　…………
After 　　, Xu Qiu and Teacher Wei went back and forth for five more rounds, until Xu Qiu went there alone, and Chen Wanqing had to prepare the PPT for the group meeting the next day.
　　 After the last round of corrections, Teacher Wei said:
　　 "Let's do that today, you can read it again, if there is no problem, just write CoverLetter, we will vote for it tomorrow."