Vol 3 Chapter 1587: Black powder invincible (20)
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Male God, Shine Bright!
- 墨泠
- 1303 characters
- 2021-01-29 09:40:32
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Unable to find for a long time, the kite went to the door to see him.
The boy may be in a hurry, sweating on his forehead, and things are turned upside down.
I heard the footsteps of the kite coming in, and the silence was slightly raised: "I found it right away, wait for me."
The first kite nodded and motioned him to continue.
The study was not spacious, and the kite looked at some photos on the wall next to the door.
They are all photos, and they should be graduation photos at different stages.
The first kite swayed and didn't see if there was any silence.
but……
How is the photo in the middle that looks like a high school graduation photo?
The first kite touched out the mobile phone, and opened the circle of friends of the original owner, and soon slipped to the bottom.
The original owner has the same high school graduation photo...
It is not very accurate to say the same, just the same as the school uniform, the school name is the same.
The first kite looked at the watermark time above, and this one was a year earlier than the original one.
In other words... is the silence of the original master?
No!
What is the original master's paper?
The plot memory is really just a plot memory, and the kite is completely unable to receive the idea of the existence of this body.
"found it."
The kiteman shook and quickly took the phone back into his pocket.
"What are you looking at?"
The position where the kite took the photo, calmly asked: "Are you graduation?"
Silently looking at the past: "Well... This is my high school graduation photo, what happened?"
The first kite asked casually: "Where are you?"
Silence pointed to the position of the edge: "Here... I was still short at that time and was blocked."
When the kite looked at the past, it was indeed blocked, only half of the face was exposed.
The first kite did not continue this topic.
There is a thick stack of A4 paper in the hands of the quiet, and the corners are slightly old. It should be the reason that the owner turned over.
He handed the stack of A4 paper to the kite: "This was my first draft, but the editor said no, so I changed it, but I prefer this version."
In the memory of the original Lord, there is the "Abyss of Sin". The first kite quickly passes through the memory of the original master, probably knowing what to write and the ending.
The main content is about the game between an undercover policeman and a social amnesty.
- Not a brotherhood, it is a very serious plot flow.
Because his ability to write stories is first-class, even for such a deep story, readers are very good at buying.
But the kite thought about it and thought that the readers probably looked at it as a brother.
In the memory of the original Lord, there are quite a few memories about this aspect, and at this point, a long sentence of up to 3,000 words was condemned.
The content is that the first time the kite is not clear, she only knows that the original owner wrote the three thousand words and smashed an all-nighter.
This is black too dedicated!
The threshold of the sunspot is also very high.
Not everyone can be a qualified black powder.
The first kite turned to the first page, and the two eyes were simply swept. The plot should be changed from undercover identity.
In the published book, the undercover was immediately removed from Daxie and began to play across the distance.
And this version she is looking at now, after the undercover identity was exposed, did not leave, still stayed.
The setting is Daxie. Although he is suspected, there is no conclusive evidence, so undercover stays there. If you look at it, the plot seems to be more exciting.
Just the content involved, there may be some super lines.
The kite looked very fast, and did not bother her, quietly took the book and sat next to it.
The number of words is not too much, and the kite will soon be finished.
Unlike his previous endings, this version of the solution is undercover, and the big one survives. The final scene is to give flowers to undercover gravestones without undercover names.
However, the fact that he published the undercover completely solved the problem and removed the entire criminal group.
"Is it finished?" Anshen saw the first piece of A4 paper on the first piece of the kite and immediately put down the book.
"Yeah." The kite put it on the table.
"Which ending do you think is good?" The light in the lonely voice seemed to want to hear the opinions of the first kite.
"I like this." The first kite said: "Why are you writing this?"
The ending of a book always ends with the protagonist of justice defeating evil forces.
Few people will write this unless there is a second...
However, the author does not have any tendency to write a second part, either from the layout or the plot.
"A person's life is not perfect." He is holding a book in silence, and his fingertips are unconsciously writing: "The book is also...hey, it may be that my mind is not very good. My former counselor and I said ""
At the time of writing this book, he was in a very strange state.
It's like watching everything is gray, there is no color.
The counselor also said that he may be depressed in this way, but... He wrote this book to meet Fei Xiu, and then the situation improved a lot.
"What you think is right."
How is the good guy card wrong?
If the good person card is wrong, please refer to the first article.
Quietly squinting, the amber scorpion is filled with shattered light: "Do you like my book?"
"Ok."
"then you……"
Oh...
The mobile phone of the first kite came in, and the vibration sound interrupted the silence.
Annoyed and laughed, indicating that she answered the phone.
The first kite came back after the call: "What did you just want to say?"
Silently shaking his head: "Nothing, I thought you would not like that version, Fei Shu said that I was too dark."
If he sends the finale of this edition, he feels that the book may not sell too well.
The kite put the phone on the table, and took the manuscript and turned it over: "People are always changing, there is light and there is darkness, and this ending is more in line with the original character set."
Unexpectedly, it is reasonable.
The revised version appeared to be somewhat forcible.
The first kite said that there are not many words, but for the sake of peace, it is like a good medicine.
The feeling of being recognized, the silence has not been felt for a long time.
"Where is the bathroom?" The first kite felt a little uncomfortable in the stomach, and for a long time, he still asked for silence.
Silence quickly pointed to the direction: "The other side."
The first kite went into the bathroom, sitting alone on the sofa and flipping the manuscript in his hand.
嗡
嗡嗡嗡
Looking quietly on the table, the mobile phone of the first kite seems to have a message coming in and vibrates several times.
The screen lights up and slowly disappears.
嗡
The screen lights up again.
Silence did not plan to see the phone of the first kite, but he seems to see his name in the news that the screen popped up.
It seems to be the news of Weibo...
Quietly looking in the direction of the bathroom, the heart is somewhat hesitant.
However, curiosity drives, knowing that stealing is not good, and still reaching out, gently tapping the screen.
The screen that was just about to be extinguished instantly lights up and unlocks directly - she is not locked.
Silence: I know that I am not right, but I can't control myself!
[Do not control the hands of your vote, let it vote! 】
[Moon ticket ah ~ rushing duck ~~]