: Talk about the recent plot

Tell me about the recent plot, no, talk about the overall plot of the third volume so far.
Originally, in my thoughts, the third volume was about the story of juvenile travels and wandering rivers and lakes. I wrote about the characters and events on the rivers and lakes. The idea is good, but the reality is often skinny.
In order to write the third volume, I read a lot of travel novels, cartoons, and movies.
To my frustration, I found that if the travel notes were placed in the online literary circle, the only ending would be unacceptable.
The reason is simple. In travel novels, the protagonist is constantly walking and embarking on a journey. This leads to two results:
One: The role cannot be shaped in depth and becomes a passerby.
Two: Readers have no sense of substitution and expectation.
I don’t need to explain the first point. I finally created the characters and got acquainted with the place, and then set off immediately.
The most deadly point is the second point. Readers have no sense of substitution or expectation. As readers, you may not have summarized this phenomenon, but as an author, I have a relatively in-depth study of readers’ sense of expectation and substitution.
A fixed map, full of characters, and a sense of expectation and substitution. .
To use an analogy, Xu Qi'an wants to sleep with a girl, the teacher of the country or the girl of the girl, which one is more expectant? Xu Qi'an has to pretend to be coercive, pretending to be coerced in front of the big bosses in the capital, or pretending to be coerced in front of a group of gangsters, which one is more expectant?
The former's sense of anticipation is based on the number of words, while travel novels, because they are too "erratic" and go around, can't create this sense of anticipation.
Before opening the chapter, I originally planned to use the unit drama model to write the Jianghu chapter.
For example, the Nine Dao Dragon Qi host is the main line to write their stories, and the protagonist participates as a bystander. But in this way, the protagonist's sense of existence is too low, and the coolness is not enough.
Not cool enough, it means no!
Later, I thought that a large number of small incidents could be used to make up for and increase the tension of the plot. Those small incidents do not have to be useful, but when passing through a certain village, a ghost is found to be messing up.
When passing through a certain town, a squire and bully are bullying men and women.
These are the usual methods used in travel notes, writing about the events and customs of the protagonist on the road, but they are not very useful for the main line.
Such a fragmented story, if you write it accidentally, it's okay, and if you write too much, it has neither a sense of substitution nor expectation, but it will give readers the feeling that the author is in the water.
Until now, I have not thought of a better way to solve these problems.
I want to ask the boss, and then I think about it, there are not many people who can teach me, besides, I don't know me either.
Throughout December, my writing status was in a scorched state.
I desperately want to find excitement and increase the tension of the plot, so I have the story of the Buddha Pagoda, but at this point, I found a problem: the foreshadowing is not enough~EbookFREE.me~ This foreshadowing does not mean that the incident is too much. It is abrupt, but the characters on all sides have not been full, the characters are not full, and the pretense has no charm.
But this is how you write travel notes.
Next, I will start the plot with "conflict", "crisis", "escalation" and Sleeping Master as the core. Then, according to the effect and your feedback, determine the length of the first half of the third volume.
The juvenile prison is only the first half of the third volume.
Let me stop here. I don’t have a single word today. I have been thinking about these issues.
In writing this chapter, the first is to complain and vomit the bitterness of the creative process. The second is that if readers have any good suggestions, they can mention it in this chapter.
The stone of the mountain can be used for jade, maybe your opinions will inspire me.
I am eager to have some in-depth, spiritual collisions with you. (Dog head)
Alright, go to dinner and finish the codeword.