: End of volume testimonials!

The third volume is over.
New year, new start.
The fourth volume is called "Competition for the Central Plains".
The background of this volume is relatively grand. Many early characters will re-appear, and many forces and characters that have been under pressure for a long time will also appear on the stage.
At the same time in the fourth volume, I will take back many of the previous foreshadowings and fill in some of the holes.
Back to the topic, let's review the whole of the third volume of "Juvenile Journey". For both good and bad, a single chapter is a rare opportunity for readers and authors to communicate.
I will talk frankly with you about the troubles and problems encountered in writing, so that you can get a preliminary understanding of the author's state of mind, inner change and so on. .
When I first prepared the structure of this volume, I was going to write it in the style of travel notes, and then slowly pave the way and unfold the characters slowly.
After writing more than a dozen chapters, I realized that the mode of changing the map was not liked by everyone, and the readers did not like the setting of Xu Bai's seal. But the main tone has been set, and I can't "change it day and night." At that time, I was particularly confused, and my writing state became very exhausted.
I hurriedly revised the outline of the third volume, adjusted the framework structure, and even issued a single chapter to seek your opinions.
While keeping it updated, the outline was revised at the same time. After a long period of downturn, my sister finally came.
Data explosion
From double repairs to returning to Beijing, and then to leaving Beijing, the climax of the book is even comparable to the chapter of the father and son showdown in the second volume.
Where is the problem in the first half of this volume? I have summarized it before, but the characters and maps have no sense of substitution.
Any map change will encounter this kind of problem, but I have already worked out a way to crack it, and I have the opportunity to try it out in the future.
Next, let’s talk about the issue of rhythm. I have carefully studied the changes in post-ordering. Any chapter that is slowly laid out will suffer a sharp drop in post-ordering, and then readers will scold it.
The author is anxious and quickly speeds up the rhythm, and then the reader scolds that the rhythm is too fast and the writing is not good.
This forms a vicious circle.
In this regard, I came to two conclusions. First, I may be too young, not stable enough, and easily affected by data. Second, probably the celebrity effect is not enough.
If it is a long-established platinum author, readers may be more patient and can tolerate a dozen chapters and dozens of chapters.
But for a Xiaopujie (such as me), I'm not so patient.
In addition to the problems summarized above, I am more concerned about a "not cool enough" problem that readers mentioned recently.
If you are also a writing friend, you can think about what I said next.
Sometimes, we have to make a trade-off between logic and coolness. Books that are too logical will often be uncomfortable, so online writing must be "no brain".
But if you are too brainless, you will appear too white. The brainless little white words in the readers' mouths often refer to such books.
Take the story of the Martial Arts League at the end of the scroll as an example, I actually have a cooler way of writing, the kind that is very cool and cool.
But as a result, Xu Pingfeng's people collapsed.
A book is written in the middle and late stages, and it is different from the early stage, and it cannot only serve for the cool. The first premise of my current writing is to maintain the main tone of the entire book, which includes the character, plot, situation in Kyushu and so on.
Then, think about being cool.
As one of the important figures, Xu Pingfeng's person is set here. Even if death is imminent, he will calmly face it calmly.
For Xu Qi'an's face slap, his unhappiness is already at the limit, and it is impossible to make him angry.
But then the reader is unhappy.
So I just said that logic and coolness sometimes cannot have both.
If you want him to go back empty-handed, and stealing chickens will not lose your rice, you will think that this is the big villain?
Are the characters forced?
Here is a little trick to maintain a strong character, which is more important than being cool. Even if you discard some of the cool points, you must maintain the character's compelling style.
Two books with similar grades may be considered as brainless and the other as brainless.
why?
Because the former only cares about being cool, while the latter will keep the characters in the book forced.
You will scold me because a short story is not cool enough, but you will not abandon the book. But if people collapse, a lot of talents abandon their books.
Am I right?
Pulling the topic back, updating has always been my anxiety and headache.
I often sit in front of the computer for a long time because a period of daily life is not interesting enough, and often because I have not fully understood a case, I cannot write for most of the day.
But I was anxious because the update time was approaching and I couldn't deliver the paper.
Often cause procrastination.
Speed ​​and quality really cannot have both. Sometimes the status is wrong and the brain is confused, which can also cause the quality of the update to decline.
Inevitable.
Then, every time I see readers in the chapter review that they should rest when they are tired, don't update it.
I take it seriously.
When I woke up the next day, I found that the chapter review was such a shame, it was forced to expand, and the monthly ticket was torn.
Hahahaha, slot!
The stumbling and stumbling written in this volume makes everyone swear, but the data is not bad.
Both are ordered for 90,000 yuan.
The rise is extremely fast, which is my only comfort.
It shows that although there are minor flaws in what I wrote, the overall situation is relatively stable. The thread that should be buried is buried, and the character that should be portrayed ~EbookFREE.me~ It broke 100,000 during the serialization period. It shouldn't be a big problem. Well, I hope I didn't plant the flag.
Starting from the fourth volume, the biggest and biggest pit of the book will kick off.
I will try to lay the groundwork slowly, instead of watching the follow-up, slowly portray some supporting roles.
For me, it is a whole new challenge.
The greatest charm of writing a book lies in this. It is constantly seeking breakthroughs, even if the direction is wrong, the hip is pulled, the follow-up order falls, at least I have tried it, and I will learn some new things.
I always hope that this book will bring you joy and happiness, at least most of the time.
This is my greatest motivation for writing books, and my greatest sense of accomplishment.
Ask for a day off, make a detailed outline!
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