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As far as the theme is concerned, "with love" is a net
In the impetuous society, the various ideas embodied in the online novels under the repressed crowd: revenge, the law of the jungle, stepping to the top, fighting for hegemony, the financial empire is certainly the material, but when these ideas are full of the entire novel and even the online novel , We ignore the warmth in human nature. There is also a so-called guardian, but most of them are ego. Some may say hypocrisy, but no matter how social history changes, the light in human nature is always full of confidence. Conspiracy power to kill fame and fortune, people will become dark and narrow in the invisible, this is how I am. In this book, Xia Yu selflessly helps students and others, even if some students ignore the help, they do n’t mind that afterwards they do n’t show that you want to repay me, everything comes from the heart. The protagonist is not broad, and he is not a good person, on the contrary, he is very personal
True in terms of character
I have read many images of brain damage in many novels, such as ridicule waste materials, jealousy, evil language, showing off, killing people, spring, emotions, etc. It is undeniable that everyone has one or other negative emotions, but it is necessary Is it such a full-scale exaggeration? Brain disability is an individual phenomenon, and it is not necessary to use a group of brain disability to set off the protagonist's "unusual".
The many images involved in parents, students, and principals in this book first make people feel true. What is true is to have the same feeling of life. In terms of shaping the image, the character psychology of a variety of poses, when talking a few words, carefully outlines their distinctive characters, the number of words is limited, and it is not easy to give examples.
As far as feelings are concerned, delicate and tender.
Take Curan ’s diary, for example, which shows the delicate thoughts and tender love of a young girl in the flower season. For Xu Xin, the secret love carried by a small tree, as far as parents are concerned, the warmth of the family. It makes people feel warm, and there are many other novels. The unsympathetic and unrequited love pursues the so-called "Heavenly Dao", the unbalanced love of the spring, and the death of the abusive due to certain facts or personality or other inexplicable reasons. Feeling sincere is especially valuable.
Add a little bit, I feel that the protagonist of this book can't let go of the feelings, there is no sense of communication like the previous one, although
Love is natural, but is Xia Yu a psychological shadow or really dull?
It's very delicate in terms of plot.
One by one, small things are buckled up, showing the character and emotion of various characters in the exhibition. It feels very delicate, like Ke Ran's attitude to the protagonist time and time again, Ma Ming's tragedy appearances again and again, well, very delicate.
It may be for digging or foreshadowing, and the direction of the protagonist seems to be less clear or the overall structure is less clear. Hopefully, it will be miserable if unclear jams cause eunuchs or broken ends.
As far as personality is concerned, well, it is very individual.
The author chose to deal with a group of modern rebellious children, which is undoubtedly very challenging and test the skills, and this article feels very successful. One by one or rebellious, cute, arrogant, cowardly but responsible, dark, gentle and kind, straightforward image is very clear, and the protagonist in the fight with students and some teachers and certain members of society or the power of the hidden power, or sharp The unique language, or the wisdom, resistance, and kindness reflected in the performance of La Feng are admirable.
As far as the style is concerned, um, humorous.
There is no vulgar vulgarity, no "reliance, God", no deliberate exaggeration or the like, Xia Yu's time and time because of the price he can pay is ridiculous. Well, the author has no such skill in the past, and there is a breakthrough.
Alas, with so much emotion, I can only helplessly sigh after the excitement.
Many times I wanted to write what I expected to be a novel. This may be the original intention of many people writing novels, just like the results of their hard work and cultivation are very satisfying. Between gaining recognition and writing what I want to write, I feel that writing my own feelings is more important, after all, that is my true satisfaction, the author cheers! There are always readers who firmly support you.
The writing style is limited, so I can only write so much. Again, the authors cheer! There are always readers who firmly support you!