Chapter 48: New script
-
The Female Film Emperor
- 轻云淡
- 2340 characters
- 2021-03-03 10:15:26
After choosing the script, Yun Yi approached Wang Ningyao and said bluntly, "You are sure to use your script. Zou Yun will play the undercover policeman, but the script has to be changed."
"Yes." Wang Ningyao nodded quickly, which she had expected.
"Don't agree to it so fast, the changes will be huge." Yunyi added, "I will tell you a few requirements, and you will write them down first."
Wang Ningyao is ready and intends to write it down on the back of the script.
"After consideration, I decided to change the double male lead to a single male lead, and the lame man to a male second lead. All his emotional lines were removed." Yun Yi said astonishingly.
Wang Ningyao was startled and hesitated, "But in this case, the following plot may be completely abandoned."
"No." Yunyi turned out the script and pointed it to the screenwriter. "The original setting was that the second man was excited because he met his ex-girlfriend and made a new boyfriend, so he was determined to rise up. After removing the emotional line, you can give the man The second arranged for a grandmother. This grandma is the only relative of the second man. She only knows that the second man is working outside, but she doesn't know what she does. He thought that the second man had a car accident and his legs were lame."
"Later, she learned the truth accidentally, and tried to persuade the second male to change his evil and return to the right. Under her guidance, the second male agreed to the male lead's informant and embarked on the right path."
Yunyi moved his finger slightly to point to a new party, "Later the second man climbed to a high position in the club and had other thoughts. He wanted to use the police to do things for himself, but he didn't want to be shackled, so he was out of control."
"Later, there was an accident that caused the tragic death of his only family member. Grandma focused on doing good, but in the end she didn't end well. She died before he had time to enjoy the blessing. The good guy did not get a good reward, and the second man's heart was shaken and he began to suspect that he was on the right path Is it the right choice? Or, whoever has the money and the power is the boss."
Wang Ningyao has some enlightenment.
Yunyi turned to the end of the outline, "Here, the original content was that the male lead pretended to leave the police force to join the club and cooperate with the male second. After many incidents, the original club was arrested and the club started fighting each other, hoping to fight The boss is a new office. The second man has a good strategy and suppresses the male protagonist’s success. After becoming a club office, he contacted foreign drug dealers to make a lot of money in bulk drug transactions."
"The front remains unchanged, and the latter is changed to a club. After being arrested, the second man becomes a new local snake. Foreign drug dealers contacted him and asked for cooperation. At this moment, he is powerful but very unhappy. After agreeing to cooperate with drug dealers , He began to hesitate, thinking over and over whether what he did was right."
"You design a plot to make him repent--he should abide by his grandmother's last wish and be a good man. Finally, he assisted the police and broke a large drug dealing case. In the end, the male lead returned to the police team and was happy with his girlfriend Life. The second male said proudly at his grandmother’s grave that he did not live up to her grandmother’s expectations and became a good man."
Wang Ningyao pondered for a moment, and concluded, "That is to say, delete all the emotional lines of the male second, and keep the rivalry between him and the male lead. Then I will find other reasons or add some fragments to make the logic smooth."
Yun Yi nodded approvingly, "That's what it means."
Wang Ningyao thought for a while, "This change will not require a lot of work."
At first, she thought she had to overthrow and start over.
Yunyi leaned back in his chair, "Don't worry. There are a lot of actors in this show. I need to spend a lot of time to find suitable actors. You have plenty of time to make changes slowly."
Wang Ningyao raised doubts, "But would this change make people feel unrealistic and illogical? The second man fell into the bottom, but he casually believed in the hero and cheered up."
Generally speaking, only love can stir up people in TV dramas.
Yunyi thought, how could it be illogical? Just seeing Zou Yun's handsome face, no matter what she said, he would dazed to agree, it was very true.
"Well, if you are worried, you can write like this. Grandma didn't know what her grandson was doing from start to finish. One time she was in trouble, and the male lead helped her, and when she was sent home, she found that she was a relative of the second male. Grandma praised her grandson for being smart Sensible, just busy at work, unable to accompany her often. Obviously, I don’t know that my grandson is doing bad things outside. The second male sees off guests. The male lead outside the door is half a threat, half encouragement, and smoothly helps the second male to cheer up." Yun Yi again Come up with a snippet.
Wang Ningyao was a little tangled, and stopped talking, "Logically makes sense..." But she always felt something was wrong.
"If you have any other ideas, let's talk about it together." Yun Yi saw her doubts.
Wang Ningyao plucked up the courage, "Generally speaking, the second male will like the female lead and have emotional disputes. Wouldn't it be too good to remove all his emotional lines?"
"Why?" Yunyi disapproved, "Like the hit drama in March this year, the male second is chasing the male lead, but the TV series is still widely acclaimed. As long as the plot is exciting enough, the male second has no emotional lines, and It doesn’t matter. The TV series are the same. They are all carved out of the same mold. The audience is tired of watching it. I hope you will write the male lead as the life mentor of the male second. The life of the male second is different for the male lead."
Wang Ningyao secretly thought, Yun Yi meant that the relationship line of the male second is the male lead?
"That's right," Yunyi interrupted the screenwriter's thoughts, his expression became extra solemn, "The original scenes of the club will also need to be changed, adding some scenes where the heroine is abused by the heroine."
"such as?"
"After seizing the evidence of the crime in the hall, the hostess immediately went to apprehend the criminal, but the criminal refused to surrender. So, the hostess beat the hall."
Wang Ningyao's expression is even more embarrassing, "Under normal circumstances, the heroine is smart and beautiful, beautiful and generous. Just leave it to the hero to catch people."
Change into a violent woman, are you afraid that the audience won't buy it?
Yun Yi thought about it, and quickly figured out a way, "Then write a small clip to use when filming. When the filming is okay (Zheng Zhonghong is beaten), just announce that this scene cannot be used."
He thought about getting Zou Yun to beat him, but Zheng Zhonghong is likely to retaliate. And being beaten by Ren Li, he can only suffer a dumb loss.
"..." Wang Ningyao was confused.
She didn't understand the point of writing such a small fragment.
Yun Yi smiled brighter and brighter, and for the first time he couldn't wait to see Zheng Zhonghong.
Casting roles, changing the script, looking for a director, Yunyi is busy preparing for a new drama.
Zou Yun didn't wait for the filming of the new drama to begin, but first got the news that the post-production of the filmed film was completed and it had already begun.
She deliberately searched the movie scenes in various theaters, and found not surprisingly that "Puzzle Madness" was played pitifully, only four times a day, and the time was not good.
Zhu Gong felt quite surprised. "Generally speaking, theaters prefer to show movies with big-name movie stars. Because the higher the box office, the more rake the theater can get. I thought "Puzzle Madness" was a suspense niche movie. , And it’s all newcomers’ performances, only two performances per day. It seems that the screenwriter secretly asks someone to help."
"You said, can the box office sell well?" Zou Yun worried.
"Enough." Zhu Gong told the truth. "The horror and suspense scripts are not very popular in China, not to mention that there is no person who supports the scene except you in the list. However, when Yunyi is out of the scandal, the crew has the opportunity to promote The film should have some effect. The final result will probably save money."
"It would be great if you can save the cost." Zou Yun stared out the window in a daze.
However, beyond everyone's expectations.
"Puzzle Crazy" is released on the third Sunday in October.
On the third day of the broadcast, sporadic private microblogs posted comments on the film.
On the tenth day of the broadcast, more and more people discussed the film.
On the fifteenth day of the broadcast, the topic of "Puzzle Crazy" hit Weibo, causing a frenzy in small circles, and by the way, it ranked first in the hot search.
The official Weibo of the crew was swiped by netizens and there were many discussions.
"It's so good! I want to point three hundred and sixty likes for the plot!"
"At first I thought it was an ordinary horror movie, but in the last five minutes, the corpse got up from a pool of blood, fucking! I scared me to death!"
"God's turn. I really didn't expect the black hand behind the scenes to be the corpse lying in the basement at first, it was unexpected."
"That, I didn't understand the first time, is it only me?"
"I didn't understand 1 the first time, but I didn't understand it after scanning it three times."
"The same IQ is not enough, crying blindly. I only realized what was going on after watching other people's videos."
"Can I say that I went to see Zou Yun? After watching for a while, I completely forgot about Zou Yun. At the end, I was still thinking about Zou Yunren. Didn’t I say that I would play the role? As a result, he, Cong, and Ji , Go up, climb up, get up, come, provoke! I scared the baby to death."
"Who can be worse than me? Watch the midnight scene. One o'clock in the morning! Watch "Puzzle Madness"! The whole person is awake immediately! There is no sleep at all! I will never dare to watch horror movies at night."
"It can only be said that I have never seen such a fresh and refined perverted monster with high IQ. Fortunately, he only lives in the second dimension."
"What are you afraid of? Jigsaw only chooses people who don't cherish their lives to play games, not everyone will be selected."
"The night after watching the movie, after I fell asleep, someone in my dream told me that I wanted to play a game with me, and I immediately woke up in a cold sweat."
"The jigsaw wants to play with the player, but the player does not want to play with him."
"...Someone likes such a drama, it's all abnormal. The scene is too horrible, I regret it after watching it again."
"I was scared 1. I have seen many horror movies and it is the first time I was so scared to faint."
"The screenwriter who wrote the script is maddening, and the front-to-back correspondence feels terrifying. When being hunted by the police, Jigsaw had a confession, which is related to the five minutes of the ending. With the final five minutes of the ending, the film went from good to good It's amazing."
"Zou Yun is also very handsome when perverted! He is obviously a silver-haired old man, but he is so cool that he can't distract his attention. Jigsaw is a murderer, but his eyes are always compassionate and super cute!"
"If you play the game upstairs, you won't think the jigsaw is cute."
"I always feel that the jigsaw is pitiful."
"My friend Amway made this movie. I was skeptical, but at the end, the whole person was silly. To be honest, this is the most exciting suspense movie I have ever seen. I have completed five brushes and hope to have a sequel."
"There will definitely be a sequel! There are still many mysteries in the ending that have not been explained, such as what happened to Dr. Gordon who ran away. I really want to know the follow-up."
"All my relatives and friends around me gave me Amway again. I really like "Puzzle" and I will never get tired of it in the last five minutes."
"By the way, can't the movie theater arrange "Puzzle" during the day and afternoon? Either it is early morning, or evening and early morning, I am scared after watching the movie! I always feel that someone will suddenly come out of the corner and take me Knock out."
"The actors are all newcomers, but they perform well, very interesting, and like them."
On the twentieth day of the broadcast, screenwriter Jiang called Zou Yun to announce the good news. On the phone, she was very excited, "The box office exceeded 10 million! The theater took the initiative to increase the number of shows to eight games a day, and the time period is good!"
"Congratulations." Zou Yun is sincerely happy for screenwriter Jiang.
At the end of a month, Zou Yun was shocked when the film went offline.
According to statistics, the box office of the movie happened to exceed 20 million.
"Puzzle Crazy" is regarded as a rare boutique in suspense movies.
Someone asked when the filming of the second episode started on Weibo.
And the jigsaw played by her is sought after by many people.