: Let's summarize briefly
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Clow Cards Cardcaptor
- Unchanging Heart
- 1994 characters
- 2021-01-31 12:31:18
Let's summarize briefly
So far, the plot of the European chapter has completely ended. This is probably the most difficult volume I have ever written since I wrote the book.
When I originally wrote it in the volume, I had a lot of things I wanted to tell you, and I wanted to talk to you about my design, my idea,
But after I really finished writing, I didn’t want to go into details anymore.
Because even carefully expounding the creation difficulties that I encountered has become a very difficult thing
Believe the story in this volume, the experience should not be perfect for pirated book lovers, after all, after almost every one is written, I will change it the next day.
Some places even took time to almost rewrite
The story in this volume is too complicated, it should be the most complicated plot I have ever written
This is also my own breakthrough and challenge. Although it is the exhaustion of the youth, I don’t want to write a routine that always saves people.
So in this volume, I set the condition that Fang Ran can leave even if he leaves,
It should be different from being forced by external circumstances and choosing to be yourself.
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There is also someone who said that I always write about the changes in my heart, repetitive and long-winded. I just think that those who say that may not have read those words carefully.
When he was flying in the North Pole, he acknowledged his strength and moved forward even if he was uneasy. The national war roll is to set foot on the stage and no longer stand still and leave the daily life.
Wandering in London is to admit that you can do something without the power, and at the same time, you have the problem of thinking about what you want
On the escape train in the wild, he was wondering why he chose to stay
After escaping from the UK, I had already figured out this problem on the hotel rooftop, and I honestly faced my heart, and I had already figured out what I would do in this incident, but I haven’t figured out what I would become in the big life. people
Then finally I heard the voice of wish,
So these are completely progressive changes in my heart. I don’t know why some people always say that I am always sensational and repeating.
In fact, if I don’t care about these things, I don’t know how much it will be easier to write.
But I have always believed that a person who simply experiences an event without a change in mood is very monotonous and brainless, like a little white writing who just pretends to be a face.
It was these actions that supported Fang Ran, from rushing into the manor, desperately trying to save Osphia, to the cult, to his brazenly rushing out of Paris,
Mental activities are linked to the actions of characters. In order to filter these, I don’t know how long the headache has been.
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Then, let’s talk about the plot of this volume as a whole, which is roughly divided into five parts.
London, Paris, tutor base, rushed to Rome, the final battle,
For the London part, to be honest, I was very happy to write at that time, because I didn’t wander into a foreign country and was chased by people. The confused development was really exciting and interesting.
I like the story of working with Tang Bing Supermarket very much. In order to write these well, I don’t know how much I learned about studying in London and living in London.
In order to check the price in the supermarket, I spent several hours
As for the part of the escape, I was not able to grasp the rhythm and atmosphere due to the influence of Tang Bing at the time. It was obviously an escape but the writing was too daily. Later, I rewritten it.
I’m actually confused about that paragraph and I don’t know how to write it down
Fortunately, the appearance of Osfiyah gave me a breakthrough to start the main storyline.
As for Xiao or Ma Ma’s foreshadowing, it was finally recovered
In fact, I originally planned to let Fang Ran and the others cross the sea to Paris, but because Bath is on the left of London, the plot is contradictory, so I gave up
This part, to be honest, the second half is not perfect. If I could design more designs in advance, it might be more interesting;
[Paris Part], among the five parts, this is probably the best one I have written, because the outline of this part is quite substantial.
I have been thinking about what to write here a long time ago, so it went smoothly
Similarly, it took a lot of time to look up the information on Paris, (at the same time I was completely disappointed in this city)
And according to the life of the people at the bottom of it, a cult was designed, the plot of the dark side of reality, and the witch hunting
Just like London is divided into cities and escapes, Paris is divided into upper and lower ends. The upper class dance party is used to compare the lower class cults, and the foreshadowing of Klim and Li Dina is recovered.
In this part, all kinds of things are very full,
For example, I carefully thought out the setting of extracting night game companions and abilities, because the arrangement of various things is relatively compact, and I can’t focus on the description, and the writing is more interesting.
It's my little regret,
Of course, in this part, the most important thing is to rush out of the two in Paris. At that time, I just completed the invasion of different degrees. Buttfly’s divine comedy made my soul warm and inspired.
[Instructor base part] There is nothing to say in particular, that is, various settings for the birth of the mechanical dragon, and the foreshadowing of the hunting of the moon god, and then use the attack to lead Fang Ran to make another choice.
The spy plan, the story of going to Rome, is part of the link between the past and the next, in order to be more dramatic, and to correspond to the scene of the witch cult. The Queen’s appearance in the night can also be regarded as a strong mentor.
In this part, I want to highlight the figure of the mentor, and the others are foreshadowing and foreshadowing
[As for going to Rome], alas
This plot is the worst part I wrote in the five parts.
Because when I wrote this, I was almost hollowed out, inspiration, enthusiasm, state, outline, everything is insufficient, I don’t know what to write or how to write this paragraph.
And because of the rhythm (that is, when the base was attacked, it had already set off the same atmosphere as the final moment), I couldn't write any light-hearted plot in this paragraph, which ruined the atmosphere.
Throughout May, I tortured me to death,
I originally wanted to write that a group of people went to Rome, but encountered heavy obstacles, like the feeling of rpg breaking through (this volume is rpg).
Although it is actually written, it always feels that it is not organized enough. How to describe it, it is the feeling that the plot design is not very neat and clear.
And in this period, I dare not slow down the rhythm, because it will waste all the tension and tension of the previous attack (after all, the timeline is only one night)
So it’s very tiring to write, and it is estimated that you will be very tired after chasing. I don’t know the impression of fattening. After all, I didn’t see any comments on the end of the volume. Very personally subjective, in my opinion, the things he doesn’t want to see are shortcomings.
It’s also a pity that Mucheng and Young Master were originally sampled in this part.
Very scrupulous about the overall scene, the young master only showed his face, the plot of Shepherd Orange was compressed, and I couldn’t even write about Le Guin carefully.
The European volume, what I regret most is that the night game characters were selected,
I originally wanted to let the night game members who didn’t appear before and who didn’t make much appearance, in this volume, add their character images, stories, past, and other things to strengthen the bond of harmony.
However, due to the failure to design all aspects of the problem, only Jota’s probably written well.
The second most regrettable thing is the planning and action of the association. I found that I hate to write this kind of thing. Although I have worked hard, I still feel that I cannot write it well.
In addition, there is also the lack of clichés, there is no place to write these, and I do not like to write the plot very straightforwardly, it is estimated that it is even more difficult for your understanding.
I’ve probably been giving you what they seem to be doing amazing things, but I don’t know what they’re doing.
Maybe I am a blood-borne wolf playing too much, and I was affected by the old thief Miyazaki Hidetaka...
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As for the final battle, there is nothing to say.
How difficult was the final climax to write, and how hysterical and meaningless I was after I finished writing, I won’t share it with you.
The source of inspiration, when I was in my junior year, I heard the song "The Light Energizer", the old rhythm lyrics, and the nostalgic background special effects
I couldn’t control it and came up with a picture of a huge silver dragon standing behind me, and then I contacted and always wanted to write a story about being thrown abroad for adventure.
After that, the national war and the association plan were successfully connected.
With this volume of European Raiders.
Yes, I actually planned to write this volume when I was a junior
So far, the handsome plot of the big stage of the book, the stock in my mind is almost used up, and the second part is half finished.
So the story of the next volume, I am still hesitating,
The extreme torture of Cavan in May and June made me deeply impressed. The pain of not knowing what to write was actually pretty good.
The most painful thing is the feeling that you don’t know what to write and write down you know something that’s not good at all.
This is too painful for an author who wants to make his debut as a dream writer.
Believe me, if I want to make more money, how can I make up the plot that I write next, and I will not have to slow down occasionally to ensure quality.
But, I want that kind of admiration,
In the plot, "you have to write like this, it must be great"
Oh, headache,
As for the end, let’s talk about the characters,
Tang Bing, Osphia, Klim,
They are different in the division of labor and responsibilities, and their character images and experiences are also completely different.
In this way, four different people form a small team to finally solve the story of this incident
I don’t know how long I imagined in those rpgs I played
I like the three of them very much ~EbookFREE.me~ In this volume, the other characters may be because of the rhythm, or because of the lack of content, lack of drama, and the lack of description of the characters.
But with only three of them, I can say with certainty that I have written the best,
(Gourd, hum, funny woman)
call.....
In the past, I always asked you whether you were satisfied in the nonsense at the end of the volume, and then said I was very satisfied.
But the words in this volume show me my upper limit and my shortcomings, which cannot be said to be satisfactory. I still have many places to write better.
But anyway, this volume is finally finished,
I should post this volume of outline to the full subscription group. You can watch it if you are curious, but the plan cannot keep up with the changes. Many plots are completely different from the outline.
That's it
(End of this chapter)