Chapter 138: Is the sky falling?

Oops, such a passionate female book friend, we are embarrassed to make it...
Di di di di, the private chat message sounded again
How much do you know in the dream: "Handsome guy, don't you come?"
Wang Ritian: "..."
Wang Ritian: "Talking to others!"
How much do you know in the dream: "I wrote for a day yesterday, and finally wrote all the information you requested, but I can’t get it in a chapter! All of these things are written out in a total of more than 8,000 words. !"
Wang Ritian: "..."
How much do you know in the dream: "Look at the writing first!"
After receiving the opening chapter from Hualuozhidao in Dream, Wang Hao looked at it carefully.
To be honest, this guy writes very simple and capable, and in many places, the scenes are very three-dimensional in just a few paragraphs, with a sense of picture.
Unfortunately, it's still a bit long-winded.
Wang Ritian: "There is nothing wrong with the overall plot, and the picture feels good, but it's still verbose. You try to remove the useless places, and the connection between the plot and the plot is more natural. Look at the last time I told you You use more than a thousand words for almost each of these elements, and you used more than 300 words for the description of the location at the beginning. This is completely unnecessary. In this part, you can summarize it. Just say a high school name. Readers will naturally figure out what high school is like."
How much do you know in the dream: "Oh, it seems that we still need to practice hard, handsome, you are very handsome when you teach well, don't you need to warm the bed?"
Wang Ritian: "Get out!"
How much do you know in the dream: "Haha, are you blushing?"
Wang Ritian: "Let’s stop talking nonsense! What about time, place, and character events? Time and place are actually just a few hundred words. The students don’t need to say too much about this part. The key lies in the introduction to the world background, because it is a battle scene. So you need to describe the power of monsters and the power of human beings, so that you can inspire readers' sense of expectation."
How much do you know in the dream: "Well, is there any more?"
Wang Ritian: "There is nothing else in other places. You can change this part first and shorten it to about 5,000 characters, and then I will tell you the plot and setting behind it."
How much does Hualuo know in the dream: "I'll change it now, what a handsome guy!"
About an hour later, Hualuo knew how much it had been in his dream to show Wang Hao the revised manuscript. This time it was really better, and all that should be explained had already been explained. Wang Hao nodded in satisfaction.
Wang Ritian: "This time it will be good, well, I will give you the following settings, um, yes, my settings for this book are very comprehensive, including various characters, levels, plot development, etc. , If you write it well, you can make a big hit! But we have to say it in advance. You said that you would write me fifteen in a thousand words, right?"
How much do you know in your dreams: "Of course, handsome guy, I will support you!"
Wang Ritian: "Get hard! I would rather die than surrender!"
How much do you know in the dream: "Sooner or later you will fall under my old mother's skirt!"
Wang Ritian: "..."
Without arguing with this guy, Wang Hao summed up the outline of "Swallowing the Starry Sky" that had been written before to Mengli Hualuozhi.
This outline is the one that Bai Yaning has seen before, and it is very comprehensive.
How much do you know in the dream: "..."
How much does Hualuo know in the dream: "Fuck, you are so awesome to set the plot or something, I really have a vision!"
Wang Ritian: "What are you doing?"
How much does the flower fall know in the dream: "Done, try to write 20,000 characters a day!"
Wang Ritian: "..."
Damn it, fifteen thousand characters and twenty thousand characters a day is three hundred yuan!
Wang Ritian: "Don't tell me, twelve thousand a day, quality assurance is the prerequisite, don't rush to make up the word count!"
How much does Hualuo know in the dream: "It makes sense! I am worthy of my destiny! Handsome guy, come here when you have time~~~"
Wang Ritian: "Go to death, Ge Rin would rather die!"
"Jingle Bell--"
Turn off the QQ, and casually read the information on the Internet, suddenly the phone rang, and looked at the electric display...
Zhao Zhenhao actually called, what's the situation?
Yesterday, the two of them left the phone at the end when they were eating. Anyway, they also gave us a famous watch. It wouldn't be kind without leaving the contact information, right?
"Lao Zhao, what's the situation?" After the poker game last night, the relationship between the two was still over, Wang Hao smiled after connecting: "What's the matter? Ask me for something?"
Zhao Zhenhao returned to that magnetic voice again: "I think of you, just call and ask."
So polite? This script is not quite right.
You should be thinking of the Bingfei star?
Wang Hao: "You care about me so much? Don't be polite to me, let's talk, what's the matter?"
"That's it," Zhao Zhenhao said: "I want to invite you to have a meal, are you free?"
I rely on, it's eating again, what kind of routine is this?
"Well, it's okay for the time being," Wang Hao thought for a while, and then asked, "Just us?"
"Yes, just the two of us," Zhao Zhenhao said with a smile: "It's just a simple meal. I know a very good French restaurant. Let's go have some?"
Wang Hao pondered for a while, Zhao Zhenhao had to give up face, and immediately asked: "Okay, yes, where can I find you?"
Zhao Zhenhao said: "You send me a position, I will pick you up."
It's a private car again, not bad.
Wang Hao immediately posted his position, and Zhao Zhenhao quickly replied: "Okay, I will be there in 20 minutes."
After leaving the crew, Wang Hao had just waited for twenty minutes before he saw a black Jaguar approaching, with Old Zhao in the car.
"What are you looking for?" Wang Hao pulled the car door and sat in, and asked with a smile: "Isn't he going to kidnap me and ask me something messy?"
"How is it possible," Zhao Zhenhao said with a smile: "You have a lot of weight in Miss Ya Ning's heart. I will trouble you unless my brain burns out. Get in the car, the position over there is already fixed."
"Okay," Wang Hao got in the car and said, "Oh, I'm so embarrassed to eat and drink with you..."
Well, if you really want to give me something nice, I won’t be polite, hehe.
"You are polite." Zhao Zhenhao smiled and started the car.
Wang Hao’s home is located in the South Third Ring Road of Zhonghai City. Generally speaking, it is in the center of the city. So it didn’t take long to reach a western restaurant called Paris Fashion. When they arrived, a row of luxury cars had been parked at the door. Zhao Xuan's local grade is high!
This time without Bai Yaning present, Wang Hao finally knew how attractive Zhao Zhenhao was!
It is indeed the tough version of Song Joong Ki Oba. With his appearance, the girls who were eating in the western restaurant all turned their heads, their eyes were as bright as a 200-watt large light bulb!
"Look, look! Good guy! God, look how charming he smiles!"
"God, I'm so handsome, I...I can't do it!"
"It's Young Master Zhao Zhenhao of the Zhao family! He actually came here!"
"Who is the turtle following him? Is it Daddy Zhao's follower?"
Listening to the whispered discussions around ~EbookFREE.me~Zhao Zhenhao also smiled back and occasionally waved in salute. His aura was overwhelming. How would Wang Hao look like his little brother with him!
This script is wrong, Nima! You are the protagonist template, right? !
"That's it," Zhao Zhenhao led Wang Hao to sit down at an empty table and smiled: "I went home yesterday and thought about it again. I think we need to meet again."
After saying this, Zhao Zhenhao stretched out his hand first: "Zhao Zhenhao, twenty-five years old, the only son of Zhao Changsheng, a branch of the Zhao family, currently runs an Internet technology company."
"Hello, hello," Wang Hao stretched out his hand and shook him with a smile, and said: "Wang Hao, twenty-four years old, a crew is a temporary worker."
With this introduction, the difference between the two suddenly seemed as big as a pheasant and a phoenix...
"Actually, I invited you this time to have a good talk with you and apologize to you by the way." Zhao Zhenhao didn't say anything about this, but he was quite calm: "I gave you that piece of Omega for dinner last night. When I watched the watch, I did not hide it. I was hostile to you before I went yesterday, so the price of the watch was 444,000. This is indeed my rude. Please also forgive me."
He stood up as he spoke, and bowed to Wang Hao very solemnly as an apology.
When the girls around saw this scene, they fry the pan on the spot!
"Isn't it?! What is the status of that young man? Can I ask Mr. Zhao to apologize?!"
"God, am I still awake today? What the is going on? Is the sky falling?!"
"It must be weird today, the Zhao Da Young Master of the Zhao family will apologize to someone!"