: Part 3 summary and leave

At the end of the first one, a total of 198 chapters were written, almost 620,000 words. On average, each chapter was more than 3,000 words, but I didn’t specifically seek to control the number of words. Sometimes I posted it at 2,5,600. Time is three thousand five six hundred.
The volume of this volume is called "Destiny", and the first sentence is "This is the spring of hope, this is the winter of disappointment". When it originally ended, like a mystery, reverse the order of these two sentences and put them at the end. "This is the disappointing winter, this is the spring of hope." Maybe the expression of the theme and the overall atmosphere of this movie will be more accurate. It is a state of spiraling progress in disappointment and hope, but in a different order. Reflect a different focus.
　　 But I don’t want to repeat the same writing too much, especially with such obvious repetitions. Otherwise, how can I show my ability? (Big hush.
Therefore, I ended up with "winter is over, spring is here". In this way, the sense of light will be stronger, and in the same chapter with other examples to set off the mixed despair of hope, it will be relatively better. The main goal of "investigating the source of innocence and the cause of the destruction of the old world", which was relatively vague before, has been established.
　　 For the entire book, this is important for the tension of the subsequent plot.
Speaking of the name of the rewind, "Destiny" is taken from Beethoven's "Symphony No. 5 in C minor". The focus is not on destiny, destiny itself. Although this is more or less manifested, I usually like classical music or have watched it. My friends of Arcane, from this name and its origin, should be able to directly associate the meaning of "stopping the throat of fate".
The main line of this movie is an investigation into the "causes of the destruction of the old world", a journey to new places, and because the investigation of this kind of thing will always not have too strong gains at the beginning, it is difficult to put tension in the plot. It's hard to hook up with suspense, so the structure of the story is closer to travel notes, and the form is relatively loose.
　　 In order to disperse the meaning, the dark thread I gave is the theme of "people and destiny", including what a person is, including the shouts, questions, regrets, and unwillingnesses made by different people when fate knocks on the door.
　　On this dark line, the writing method I used is "reverberant structure", um, I named it myself, and I don't know what it is called in the formal writing class.
　　 In short, on the same or similar problem, at different stages, from different angles, from different populations, I made a sound again and again, forming an echo.
　　 And in the end, Shang Jianyao superimposed these reverberations together, made his own voice, and completed the landing of his character.
In the entire "Destiny" volume, the refugees in Yecao City, Han Wanghuo, and Gnawa are a group of more obvious echoes. The servants who died silently in the "Ark below the ground" are the victims of the black rat town in the first part. An echo of the slaughter, these two sets of echoes added together, it almost expresses the meaning of the dark line I want.
In fact, in Tarnan, I also made a small "reverberant structure", which is to revolve around the phrase "dream dreams everywhere, why be serious", and let it continue to be spoken from Zhou Guanzhu and Shang Jianyao, forming a funny and funny In the end, Zhou Guanzhu said the sadness behind this sentence, reaching the effect of tears under the smile and tragedy behind the comedy.
　　 At that time, I still feel quite good about myself, all the sadness is rushing in the calm and darkness, laughing.
In addition, the whole dark line, all the repercussions, are also serving to shape the character. After all, you can’t write about Shang Jian Yao’s psychological activities. How to put him in the real place and write full, it is very, uh, in Sichuan dialect In terms of it, it is very brainstorming. This way of letting him make the last echo and give his own answer is a way.
　　 After talking about what you want to show and what you actually show, let's talk about the problem.
　　 The biggest problem is the writing of travel notes.
　　 Travels, you must change the map, and you have to change a place after dozens of chapters, which causes the characters that have been difficult to be created in a blink of an eye, or there is no time to create more characters with more feeling on different maps.
　　 Without a good bedding, if you want a knife, you can't use force, and the knife can't feel. It's not as good as no knife, so the response is not so full and powerful.
Of course, there are other reasons for this, because the repercussions come from different people, rather than the protagonist himself, which makes it impossible for readers to have the same emotions ~EbookFREE.me~. After a plot, the feelings naturally vent, even The content has been forgotten to a certain extent.
I have written about other issues in the previous month summary. What kind of person’s sense of substitution, what kind of team action makes too much interaction seem cumbersome, I will not repeat them one by one, these are all through continuous adjustment of writing and entry points. To solve it, I believe everyone who chased it down all the way should be able to understand.
　　 New stories, new writing methods, there are always all kinds of problems. Constantly finding and constant solving are both painful, happy, and rewarding for me. It’s good, laugh.
　　 The fourth part is also a long story. This time it is no longer written in travel notes. After the company's interlude, it is basically based on "First City", and many of the previous characters will also appear again.
　　 Well, the volume is called "The Emperor", which is taken from Beethoven's Fifth Piano Concerto.
　　Because I just finished writing a long story of almost two hundred chapters, and then a new volume of similar length, I need to relax my mind and improve the corresponding outline, so according to the usual practice, take a leave of three and a half days.
In three and a half days, the update should be resumed on the 29th, which is 12:30 noon on Thursday, but my daughter-in-law’s maternity check-up happened that morning, and I had to go to the maternity and infant class. Well, three and a half days from now on, the 29th, that is, the update will resume at 7 o'clock in the evening on Thursday.
　　 Bow and thank everyone.
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