Chapter 444: Second class

"Qingwu please peace with Master." Xiao Qingwu had Kuiye hanging on his chest, and said helplessly: "The armor is on the body, it is inconvenient to give a gift, Master, please don't blame it."
Xue Mu almost didn't smile: "Qing Wu, you are getting more interesting now, you can consider writing a paragraph."
"It's just because of facing the master." Xiao Qingwu secretly gave you a bellyband. What else can she shrink from? She is not so cheerful when facing others.
Xue Mu asked, "Is here to hand in my homework?"
"Yes, I went to give Ji Qingyuan a routine treatment early in the morning, and now I'm here to ask Master to comment on his homework." Xiao Qingwu endured for a long time, and finally pulled the endless night on her chest unbearably and took out one. The manuscript, carefully said: "Master, please give me pointers..."
Xue Mu was shocked: "So many!"
"It looks like ten or eighteen, I wrote eighteen games."
"..." Xue Muru looked at the heavens and people: "Don't you know that you can put 18 kinds of appearances in one game?"
Xiao Qingwu was dumbfounded: "Huh?"
Xue Mu hated the iron and taught: "What about the 18-like appearance of 36 Sanshou, that is just to say, as long as the general appearance is good, then that is the essence. Why do you want you to write 18 kinds?"
Xiao Qingwu listened to the training dejectedly, recording his homework secretly.
Xue Mu was reading the manuscript with Liu Wanxi in his arms. Although he hated iron and steel, he was actually too happy in his heart. It was very interesting to see the little yellow text written by this cowardly medical fairy.
The text is pretty good, but the scene structure is not well written, there is no immersive feeling in a few strokes, and it is slightly rigid. This can’t be helped, it’s for practice...
Then, the description of that matter is particularly interesting, full of serious medical terms, no character expressions and no verbal communication, stereotyped posture movements, and even an evaluation of which posture is easier to get pregnant.
Nothing...
Looking at it, Xue Mu suddenly flashed a word in his mind:
Physiological Hygiene Textbook!
"Wanxi, do you have any reaction after seeing it?"
"No, no..."
"The reader has no reaction, this is the text that failed." Xue Mu sighed, and folded it back upright: "You keep it for yourself, and you can revisit it later, so you can refer to it."
This remark had the meaning of true teaching again, Xiao Qingwu blushed and carefully put it away, and whispered: "Master, please give me some advice."
"Whether this kind of scene or formal scene, the story must first be interesting. For example, this scene has a grape rack, which is a unique point of interest. If you don't show it, just say how to move under the grape rack, is it a waste? ?"
Xiao Qingwu nodded if he was enlightened, and then wondered: "How to use this together, I can't think of it."
Kuiye said: "Daddy writes an article for the younger sister, don't keep embarrassing my younger sister."
"You little thing." Xue Mu couldn't laugh or cry. He felt a little itchy after thinking about it. It's been a long time since he wrote a small yellow article. This is still a classic scene, and it should be used as a movie in the Water Margin!
Just do it, Xue Mu directly embraced Liu Wanxi and spread out a roll of paper and began to write a sample essay.
Liu Wanxi didn't even read the memorials, but Xiao Qingwu Kuiye even came over with Ye Guying, and looked at the writings of "Generation Wenzong" with their heads stretched out one by one.
Without looking at it, Kuiye was the first one who couldn't stand it, covering his eyes and ran away. After a while, Ye Guying also turned away silently. Only Xiao Qingwu blushed, watching with shame and admiration, wanting to leave but also want to learn.
Liu Wanxi in her arms has long since become a puddle of mud.
"Pan Jinlian Hanging Upside Down a Grape Frame", this classic scene can be immortal... Where have you seen a stranger?
Some big white legs are stretched out and hung on the grape racks on both sides, and they are described in incomparable detail, such as golden dragon probing claws, red gully dew... Imagine that kind of depressed scene, where Kui Ye is directly defeated. Ye Guying retreated when Ximenqing took the plum to throw the pot, and hit the bullseye with all three shots... Liu Wanxi was weaker than putting the plum in... Xiao Qingwu's face had turned into a burning cloud when he pulled it out and ate it.
As for what I did afterwards, I really thought it was full of wit, and I didn't know where it was better than Xiao Qingwu's physiological hygiene teaching materials.
Xue Mu threw the pen and waved his hand freely: "Take it back and make a model essay, and try to figure it out."
The air was very quiet, and after a few breaths, Xiao Qingwu shrankly accepted the manuscript, not daring to look at it again just like there were thorns on it, and quickly stuffed the small medicine sac.
Xue Mu leaned comfortably on the chair: "Qing Wu, your little schoolbag is so cute..."
"Thank you, Master, for your guidance, Qingwu went back to figure it out." Xiao Qingwu could not understand what Xue Mu was talking about, reluctantly saluted, and ran away panicked. When I got to the door, I was almost knocked down by the threshold. I knocked my head and ran away in tears before I had time to cry.
"Uh...Is it too hard?"
Liu Wanxi chuckles: "You accept someone as an apprentice, and teach some real kung fu too. It's too much molesting..."
"The model essay for reason is what they asked for themselves. Ahem...Although this one is particularly powerful..." Xue Mu scratched his head: "I'll teach her something else next time, it's really not good."
Liu Wanxi murmured in wintry eyes: "Who have you played with in such a terrible scene?"
"No, it's not me, don't talk nonsense..."
Liu Wanxi twisted slightly, her lips brushed across his cheek, and the sound was like a mosquito: "Do you want to...play with Wanxi like this?"
Xue Mu was shocked, and concealed it with a dry cough: "Forget it, this is not good. Pan Jinlian just played like that..."
"When you drink half a cup of residual tea, am I not Pan Jinlian..." Liu Wanxi pursed her mouth and said nothing more, just said: "Well, I have to deal with the memorial, and I will deal with Ji Qingyuan later. . We... will be long in Japan."
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Liu Wanxi has to do business, not only to deal with Ji Qingyuan, but also to learn how to deal with government affairs by herself. This is a big deal, not a time for jokes.
Although Xue Mu was itchy by her explicit instructions, he didn't continue to disturb her. He got up and went out to carry Kuiye, greeted Ye Guying, and ran to Xiao Qingwu's palace, intending to teach her some serious remedies.
There was a maid leading the way along the way, and she was dragging her children and her daughters, really treating the inner palace as a back garden.
"Dad is really dirty."
"The leader is perverted."
This is the words repeated by the little sisters and sisters along the way, all incarnation of Xianglin's wife and chattering endlessly, and there are no other new sentences. It seems that they really don't know how to describe.
Xue Mu lowered his head and made no sound. It seemed that the grape rack was guilty of the anger of everyone except Liu Wanxi. It's better to be sprayed and don't resist, to teach others a little seriousness. The image can be saved a little bit...
Xiao Qingwu's single-house residence has a lot of origin. This is the residence of Xia Houdi in the palace. Quiet and quiet, with a few plum blossoms dotted in the courtyard, the environment fits Xiao Qingwu's taste perfectly. There is also a maid who takes care of her diet and daily life. If she is in accordance with her habits, if she is not going to treat Ji Qingyuan, she can stay there for the rest of her life.
When Xue Mu visited, Xiao Qingwu's face had not faded. She couldn't see Ye Guying, and when she saw Xue Mu taking Kuiye with her, she didn't close the door in fright, but bowed weakly: "Master..."
"Ah, the sample essay just now was because I didn't think about it well. I tried too hard. I apologize to you."
Xiao Qingwu was stunned, but shook his head: "Master's article is very good, and I have learned a lot."
Xue Mu was stunned: "What have you learned?"
"Scene and action, language and demeanor are combined in all aspects to be vivid and vivid, instead of rigidly explaining what you want in your heart. As for those who are obscene but not appearance, what Qingwu learns is the way of writing. How to describe and how to describe military affairs are actually the same."
Xue Mu stared at her blankly. He knew that a genius had already shown his head. Even without Xue Mu in the world, Xiao Qingwu would shine brightly sooner or later.
He took a deep breath and said seriously: "Last time I talked about the three elements of a novel, then let's talk about structure and foreshadowing today..."
As the director of the entertainment company, Xue Mu often did some internal training lectures before crossing. He is no stranger to the job of guest teacher, but he has never been so serious in both planes.