: * Gentle e-knife * Tan Jiading

I first met Yu Da, from the "Meeting People of the City" that I met casually. To be honest, the most popular thing about Edao is the starting point urban novel. I feel that this kind of work is very close to life and has a sense of substitution, and it is easy to bring myself the super feeling of YY. After watching it, I feel comfortable and emotional. To paraphrase a sentence in the group: Look at Yu Da's work, it's quite thirsty!
I have to admit that even if it was the first work published at the starting point, Yu Da's description of the emotions of the characters was extremely in place. Although the results of "Good Man" are not very satisfactory, I see the potential of a successful author. I have a good grasp of the structure of the story, and the three points of the character's molding have made me love this work. It took almost three or four days to read it in one breath.
I also thought this was the case, which made me follow up and read "The Best Family". I said that apart from urban books, I rarely read other types of works, especially fantasy, which is my least favorite. I was very annoyed, because Yu Da actually let me watch "Family" and saw that I did n’t want to eat tea. I did n’t have the opportunity to surf the Internet at night. I actually used the mobile phone to browse the Internet. Oh poison.
Of course, I am also fascinated by this work at the same time. Let's cut into the subject:
(1) About characterization.
1, third brother.
It is undeniable that Yu Da gave us a magical world and a imaginative space in the house. In the world of the third brother he created, I found infinite satisfaction. I can laugh and laugh with the third brother, and worry with the third brother, and joy with the third brother, and YD with the third brother ... Through this work, I understand what is the ultimate shame, the ultimate indecent and the ultimate YD.
Undoubtedly, San Brother's characterization is successful and can be called a classic. His unbridled and unrestrained, he is outstanding, he sees nothing in the world, sees the heroes as dung, and the beauty of life like gold, which makes me quite obsessed. The third brother is a real man with flesh and blood. He has the smoothness and savvy peculiar to modern people, and the blood and spirit in traditional Chinese culture. It can be said that the shaping of this character makes the reader's sense of substitution extremely strong, and it is no wonder that it will be so successful.
2, about women.
关系 Length of relationship, not all, just talk about some women.
I first said Miss Xiao family. I like this woman very much, but in the first 200 chapters, she is my favorite. The main reason is that in the era when men and women were humble in the ancient background, her personality was stubborn, decisive and strong, and she was an absolute avant-garde. Type, but I like it. Poor expression of her emotions, an attitude of refusal to return, a little feminist style, and a monogamous embrace make her personality distinct and remarkable. Of course, the reason why many readers don't like her is because her personality is too strong.
I say Xiao Yuruo again. The second lady who dared to love and hate, from confrontation with the third brother to knowing each other, this process definitely set off the cuteness of this little girl. Her characteristic is that she has a bit of arrogance in her willfulness, but she is very young, but she is obsessed with love. Well, this girl has developed.
Luo Ning. What I want to say about this woman is that I really did not expect that she turned out to be a Y baby D woman, dug ha ha ha ... but I like it. Nothing to say, support!
Sister Luan. 55555555555, I love you! !! !! Unfortunately, there are too few plays. This woman is the product of the perfect combination of charm and wisdom, and it is a model of calamity to the country and the people. The third brother eats this set the most. It is estimated that in the future, besides Qing Xuan, he will be the most able to hold the third brother.
Other women don't say anymore, too much. I focus on Ning Yuxi.
The reason why I wrote this book review today was actually moved by the fairy. Judging from her background and growth experience, her original heart was astonished, but she was so disgraced by the three shameless disguise that she had to eat the fireworks on earth, and she really showed her great strength. The cuteness of this character is to make readers love and hate, and finally like her completely. There is also a wonderful work with the same song is Qi Qing.
With her ambivalence, Yu Da portrayed well. Because of the destruction of Xianfang and hatred of Sange, and because of the long-term contact was conquered by the charm of others, the repeated contradictions among them made the reader addicted.
Xian Xianzi's transformation is well written ~ EbookFREE.me ~ After admiring San Brother silently solving one problem after another, she admired him. In the third brother's personality that did not play cards according to common sense, he felt a deeper helplessness and struggle. But this struggle made her even more eager to stop, and eventually became the emotional captive of the third brother. OK, it's so in place, it's really impossible to describe the beauty in words.
I wrote this book review entirely because I did n’t have the mood to code today, I did n’t have the mood to work, and I was totally attracted by the story.
22. Some personal opinions.
1. About the number of women.
I personally think that women should not be added any more. Except for a female boss who has the deepest concealment, the rest women are free to play. The more women there are, the fewer the existing characters and roles are, which is not conducive to arrangement. Even if it ’s over and over again, I ’m afraid it will require a considerable number of words, otherwise it ’s hard to write.
2. Grasp about the plot.
I didn't feel procrastinating, but I always felt that the story would be long. To deal with internal and external problems, including things like Turks, Japanese pirates, and Koreans, a lot of details are needed. In addition, the women in the account are not enough to make a torment: women bosses, Tong Qing, fairy, sister An, Miss Xiao family, Chang Jin, and so on. Sweat, I feel that there is still a long way to go.
个人 I personally hope that Yu Da can write this story a little longer. This will also allow me to appreciate San Ge's personality charm for a longer time.
3. The most unexpected thing about Jiading's readers is that there are masters everywhere, which can be seen from the book reviews of the poems that can be seen everywhere. It can be seen that Yu Da's book has attracted readers of all cultural levels, and is indeed a master of masters.