: Uphold the original intention

This is the result of my rewrite after I deleted it, please review it.
The original content didn't have so many pre-match foreshadowing, and there was no character building. After chapter 414, the game with Blue and White Munich started directly, scoring goals and breaking records. I think it's not refreshing to write this because it lacks foreshadowing, and it doesn't create any impressive characters. It completely wastes such an important game as the semi-finals.
At that time, it was because the book was about to be finished, and the plot moved faster.
The quicker the result, the more mistakes, and turned into the gutter.
The game was written very painfully, without passion or feeling.
After forcibly writing about half the game, I don't think I can keep writing like this. After calming down and thinking seriously, you still have to return to the "original intention":
This book is not about how the protagonist Hu Lai acted alone, but about a world.
In this case, there are no other characters with distinct personalities, ideas of their own, and different stories, so what does it mean to shape a world?
So delete and rewrite, slow down your mind, and repeat the description from multiple dimensions to shape different characters.
For example, Hantecek, a personality coach who did not hesitate to leave his old club for his own future, and played a bad guy in front of the fans of his old club in order to win. Another example is to increase the description of Becker's Golden Globe Award... and so on.
But the two-round semi-finals are written as a game, and they are also conceived and described as a complete story, with beginnings and endings, foreshadowing, climax, and ending... everything is available.
And these are actually what some readers call "water", which is also the charm of the novel.
Everyone knew that Hu Lai was going to break the record, and some people even guessed how to break the record. But that's just the skeleton of the story.
These alone are not enough.
From chapter 415 to chapter 443, the thoughts, personalities, and details of the characters who are close to 30,000 characters are the fleshy flesh.
Without these meat to fill the skeleton, just show everyone a skeleton, what is the beauty at all?
In this way, when everyone finishes watching this episode, they will really feel refreshed when they break the record for Hu Lai, because the people and emotions in it are real, and they can entrust everyone with a sense of substitution.
Instead of being dry I wrote that Hu Lai scored a goal, I wrote that Hu Lai broke the record. It's all about me telling you how, not what you feel when you read it.
Judging from the final effect, I succeeded. Whether it is a subscription or a monthly pass or the activity of the chapter, it all proves this.
So even though some people scold me for water when I set up before the game, I still insist on writing this way.
And in order not to affect everyone's reading experience, I will delete all the comments that say water. If the fan value is only a trainee, apprentice, disciple who scolds me for water, then I will not only delete the post, but also ban it - this is I've emphasized it before.
If you see that your comment about water is gone, don't come and ask why you deleted the comment, because you are talking nonsense. If I don't delete it, I will keep the cubs?
It's not water, it's fiction, it's a world.
Seventy percent of the human body is water, and seventy percent of the earth's area is also water. People cannot live without drinking water, and life cannot be born without water in the world.
Therefore, my novels will definitely be "water". This is my characteristic and advantage. I am proud of it and do not plan to change it.
If you like it, see if you can accept it.
If you don't like it~EbookFREE.me~ don't watch it if you can't accept it.
Everyone chooses both ways, and everyone is safe.
I believe that those who can see here are all readers and friends who have recognized and accepted it. Thank you for your support and understanding. It is the world we shape together.
This novel will be finished with more than one million words. According to my speed, it may be finished by the end of this year or the beginning of next year.
Even in the final stage, I will always uphold the original intention and the attitude I had when I first started writing this book. As long as there is any part I am not satisfied with, I will delete and rewrite it, and take every plot seriously.
On the day when the book is finished, I hope that we will all look back on the way we have come over the past two years, and we will still be able to think of many clips that make people smile and numb their scalps.
Thanks!
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