: Summary of recent plot design and writing perception
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I Really Just Want to Hit the Iron (All I Really Want Is To Play Basketball)
- Write Quietly
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- 2021-01-30 03:36:27
In other words, I haven't opened a single chapter for a long time to discuss writing experience with your handsome book friends.
Taking advantage of the fact that the updates in the past few days are not bad, Qiao decisively decided to open a single chapter to share with you the recent plot design summary.
Of course, before discussing the plot with every handsome reader...
Dear ticket kings, the appointment date has arrived. Welcome your monthly tickets and recommended tickets to their positions? (Nike laughs.jpg.)
2333333, let's talk about business!
First of all, from Chapter 251 to Chapter 338, in the content of Chapter 80, we explained how Su Feng and the Raptors in the 98/99 season went from building a team to winning the championship, and then to the story of the national team, and 99/00 The turning point of the season and paved the way for the NBA's chaos in the next few years.
So before we talk about the follow-up plot, let's talk about why Qiao will design Su Feng to win his first career championship in the 98/99 season?
First, Qiao said before that basketball essays are sports essays. The most difficult part is that because the basketball text itself is a re-creation of reality colleagues, no matter how the author controls it, as the protagonist’s seasons increase, the future Stories are prone to lack of suspense and break down in rhythm.
And sports literature generally has aesthetic fatigue.
That is to say, it is annoying to watch a reversal, to watch a record-breaking, annoying for the protagonist to be invincible for a long time, annoying for the protagonist not to win, annoying for the protagonist to win, and so on.
Therefore, Qiao arranged for Jordan to join the Raptors in a reasonable way. The purpose is to arrange for Su Feng to successfully win the 98/99 season and complete the inheritance with Jordan by the way.
In terms of writing, this is called "spoiler-through writing", that is, the author first explains the ending, and then pave the way for the process.
For those who use suspense to attract people's attention, the biggest drawback of this writing method is that if your process fails to catch the reader, it will easily lead to the loss of follow-up orders.
I have to say that Qiao is really very grateful to everyone here.
Because although the previous update was not strong, even during Qiao's "one beast, two days and one beast" period, Qiao's post-orders have been stable at around 5000 to 6000. (Oh, by the way, we almost broke ten thousand orders even if we missed it. I beg you guys to come to the starting point to read and support Aqie!)
Therefore, if you look carefully, readers who are chasing down all the way will find that Qiao’s purpose of adopting a "spoiler style"...
It wasn't for the process of going to the water competition. On the premise that the ending had already been explained, a lot of pen and ink was spent describing how Su Feng should win the championship.
Because in Qiao’s original setting, Su Feng had to win his first career championship in the 98/99 season.
Therefore, in my layout, winning the championship is not the most important thing.
It's the so-called one ring after another.
So now the problem comes again.
Why does Su Feng have to win this season in Qiao's setting?
Because according to Qiao’s design, Qiao’s next plot will turn a lot, and as I said, it’s impossible for Su Feng to win more than ten consecutive titles in a 20-season book. So from the perspective of writing, this is also called giving readers first. A sugar.
Giving readers a candy first can give readers the courage and motivation to continue chasing the book, and it can also increase the trust between readers and authors.
In short, Shuangwen must be cool, but in order to be reasonable, we have to have some twists and turns.
Therefore, from the perspective of the timeline, winning the championship in a reduced season will not only have the least impact on my next layout, but also allow Su Feng to gain the upper hand in his battle with O'Neal, Duncan and others.
After all, in this way, Su Feng is the first of the three to win the championship. In terms of momentum, as long as he obtains more honors than Duncan and O'Neill in the future, then he will be able to suppress these two great gods.
Therefore, after telling you the ending in advance, Qiao’s focus has always been the so-called character description throughout the 98/99 season.
For example, Su Feng, McGrady, and Carter’s daily life. For example, I spent a lot of space to explain Su Feng’s next opponents. For example, I created a hard-mouthed Pierce. Feng's strength increased, and a lot of pen and ink was spent on the details of Su Feng's strength.
Including what you said at the beginning of this season, in order to write Su Feng's toughness, I can even spend the first half of the chapter.
In Qiao’s opinion, an excellent book should not only have a fast pace, an excellent character set, and a good plot. He should also have a portrayal and profile description of the characters.
After all, if I skip a lot of things, you will find that the image of Su Feng simply can't stand up when you come back to it later.
But until now, I believe that many readers have seen it, whether Su Feng, Iverson, or Kobe, I have been writing about Su Feng’s world as a real parallel world.
Therefore, in this one, I will definitely intersperse some details, and even sometimes, a game is over with one sentence, but I can write a detail for a long time.
Because only the details can increase the authenticity and rationality, and the increase in the authenticity and rationality can cause resonance in the sense of substitution.
And you know, it’s easier to write about the game than to write about such details.
So, this is why I say that I sometimes have to polish a chapter for five, six, seven or eight hours, or even ten or so hours.
Some people say, Qiao, you can write faster, it doesn't matter if the quality is worse.
But here comes the problem. In this way, maybe my retro booking will be higher, but my average booking will never be as high as it is now.
Because the reason is very simple.
In that way, many friends who choose to raise first and then slaughter them, or those who chase all the way, will have a clear psychological gap when chasing books and rereading.
As I said, I must write to the quality that I can reread it several times.
And this quality is by no means as simple as correcting three or two typos.
What chapter, at what time, and what kind of plot to write.
What kind of writing is used in this chapter, and from whose perspective it is written.
In the next chapter, how to carry out the transition and preparation, and how to connect after the preparation and transition, these are all Qiao needs to spend time to polish.
Therefore...Since Qiao suffered a series of blows in reality, for the sake of quality, many times, I would like to communicate with you, but because of poor updates, I myself dare not even upload QQ.
But recently, the state has indeed recovered a lot.
So, thank you readers again for your support! Thank you, handsome readers, for giving Qiao so much patience and confidence.
Thanks again.
well, let's get back to business.
Next, let's talk about the latest foreshadowing.
Some people say, Qiao, your history has become too big, right?
Huh...
Wake up, if I write about 20 seasons and all the players are the same, what's the difference between asking you to go to the small break station to find the NBA commentary video?
Qiao said before that the biggest problem with sports articles is that after a few seasons of writing, basic old readers can write for you.
But at least for now, I think you will never guess the future of this book.
As I said, some people's career trajectory I will not move, but some people I have to move.
For example, for some reason, based on my personal conjecture of reality, Duncan went to the Celtics.
And for some reasons, I took great pains to pave the way for Xiao Yao, and on this point, I also talked to the water stalk next door...
In fact, this Han Han planned to let Xiao Yao continue to de-mosaic. At that time, I told him directly that Xiao Yao is all here in your book. Why do you want to de-mosaic?
Does the appearance of your protagonist bring about a change in history?
So the question is, if everything is set in stone, why don't I directly use the protagonist of the indigenous people, but must use the protagonist of crossing?
The reason is very simple. As early as when I was about to write about iron-strike, I thought that I would follow my thoughts.
In my world, the protagonist is linked, but I must also respect the IQ of other teams and the IQ of the players at the same time.
Just like Su Feng will improve, Kobe will improve, the Raptors have luxury packages, the Celtics also have a new four-star team, and the Lakers have a new Big Three.
There are many stars in this era, so why not let them have a thrilling chaos?
Write a basketball article that you are familiar with, but unfamiliar.
This is my original intention when I opened the book.
What you are familiar with is this player and this era, but what is unfamiliar is my layout and my unpredictable suspense.
Only in this way can I guarantee that when I write about the last season, you still don't know if Su Feng really wants to retire, it is really the last season of his career.
And you don't know what kind of honor Su Feng will get, and at what time point he will become the first person in the NBA.
Of course, Qiao's ability to come up with so many show operations is also related to the many ideas you provided me in the chapter review.
Hmm...I'm an author who never copied chapter reviews, I'm just a porter of excellent chapter reviews.
In short, I hope I can persist in writing my ideas, because even if it is a small breakthrough, in Qiao's view, this step must be taken.
Otherwise, change one book for another... I really don’t know one day after my enthusiasm for basketball has faded away, I will still want to write basketball articles.
So let's just say that...
Water is not water, to be honest, the benevolent sees the benevolent and the wise sees the wisdom. Because now I feel that many people have different ideas about "water".
For example, some people just like to see full details, and some people just like to watch one game after another.
And just like when I look back at the Saint Seiya now, I can't stand it at all.
Because don't you think that the Saint Seiya has no daily routines, and many plots and the characters that Chetian wants to shape simply cannot stand up? (The most important thing is that there are still a lot of BUG.)
On the contrary, in many daily fans, although there are not so many punches, I feel the charm of the characters and the attraction of the author's personality to me.
Anyway, the same sentence...
When it’s time to jump into the plot, Qiao can complete a season in a few chapters, but when I need to pave the way for my plot this season, Qiao will spend a lot of chapters to fill in the details, and when it’s time for the second time, Qiao will also It takes a hundred thousand words to describe a series of matches.
Each plot has the focus of each plot.
And only after stringing these corresponding points together, just like when I wrote that Jordan joined the Raptors before, you will not feel abrupt...
Only reasonable preparation and inference can make the plot go on smoothly.
Therefore, Qiao has always been a code word tool with no emotions.
I won't adjust this way of writing, because I said, it's not a matter of explaining the outline in a few paragraphs.
As the author of iron strike, it is even more impossible for me to give up this kind of thinking for one day's achievement ~EbookFREE.me~.
therefore......
Thank you for your support.
After all, without your support, I would not dare to try so many new ideas and sorrow routines in iron strikes so willfully.
Of course, that sentence...
As an author, Qiao also wants to have a good meal!
I can’t afford to buy pork, and the recent days have been so bitter that I can only look at the yard of my hometown in the countryside, there are no heatstroke Pippi shrimp and the depressed Pippi chicken sauce purple......
Cry!
Wrong, this wave is not selling badly!
It’s a monthly pass, or a recommendation ticket!
Those readers who typed "next time", you are so pitiful and pretty! Don’t "do it next time"!
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