: Summary of plot design for season zero/one and season one/two!
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I Really Just Want to Hit the Iron (All I Really Want Is To Play Basketball)
- Write Quietly
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- 2021-01-30 03:37:02
First of all, as always, thank you handsome readers for your support.
Then, let's talk about the plot arrangements for these two seasons.
Yes, that’s right. In Qiao’s outline, these two seasons Qiao was originally arranged as a season plot. Therefore, many careful children’s shoes may have noticed that Qiao basically skipped the two seasons. Only focus on the key points to write about important games.
So now let’s talk about the first question.
Why did Qiao design these two seasons in this way when designing the outline last year?
Well, some of the children's shoes that are still in the book and have not had time to taste, don't read it down, because the content of the following part will directly involve the spoilers of the two seasons.
1. Judging from the layout of the whole book, Qiao made a psychological expectation for many readers as early as Su Feng’s rookie season. That is, there will not be 20 seasons in my book. It's Su Feng's situation.
Because for a book that needs to be written in detail for 20 seasons, it is called nonsense and irresponsibility, which will only make the book die faster and finish the book ahead of schedule.
And here, don’t believe me, readers. Just to give an example...
As we all know, the plug-in has always performed well before Qiao's body is ill, but, be careful! Before I got sick, the plug-in actually had a subscription crash, that is, the time Lin Yi got 100 points.
So why did the subscription crash after Lin Yi scored 100 points?
The reason is very simple, because the plot cannot be substituted because the head is crooked too much, and it is out of touch with reality and it is distorted!
After all, even if I write 100 points more reasonably, because Lin Yi was close to completing the dynasty at the time, after he scored 100 points, even some readers who like a certain Lu style would say that it is cool, but most sensible genuine readers , But not so.
This also resulted in the fact that after returning from an injury, he could only use the outline method to explain the situation of the next few seasons of Lin Yi's career. Because at that time, if you write in detail, one is pure watering, and the other is that readers can no longer expect any more of the following plot.
After all, your protagonist is invincible enough to rush out of the universe, so I still watch a √ eight?
Therefore, after learning the experience and lessons of the plug-in, plus the iron plan, it is still the NBA's big pattern for 20 years, and it has to be a relatively detailed way to protect the later period. As the of Su Feng in this time and space, Qiao will Need to pave the way for the outline and details.
First of all, I am more pleased that although this writing method is difficult, most of the readers give me feedback that they feel that they have more motivation to read. And such feedback also greatly boosted Qiao's fighting spirit in January through subscription. Throughout January, as of now, can you believe that Qiao, who encountered various situations in the second half of the year, has updated 150,000 words? To be honest, Qiao couldn't believe it.
Then here, by the way, answer a question from trainees, apprentices, disciples, and a very small number of bigwigs that will appear every time like this. Is the arrangement for these two seasons deliberate?
So now the question is, in reality, why did the "Lakers Second Dynasty" fail to win the third crown? Why didn't Durant and the Warriors win the third championship together? Was it because the reality was too deliberate to fail to win the third crown these two times?
Just like in my book, several old readers who chased from the plug-in said in the chapter review (please check your seat), why is it difficult for the Dynasty team in the third year, because it often means you want to establish a Dynasty In three years, you have to play almost all the matches. Therefore, considering that there will be the Olympic Games in 2000, how much rest time is left for some core Raptors players in one year?
So, is such an injury accidental? No, it is inevitable.
Secondly, just like I arranged for Iverson to suffer from Jones fracture, why did Iverson miss the last two months of the game in the 0102 season? It is because in order to comply with reality, Jones fractures tend to be repeated in the second and third years. (So are there any accidents in reality? It is that after encountering Jones's fracture, he recovered quickly, and he recovered 100%? The answer is regrettable, no. Because many athletes' injuries, even if it is not Jones' fracture, are repeated, such as the more famous The ankle of the elementary school student, Clay’s Achilles tendon.)
But why is it not deliberate to arrange for Iverson, but deliberate for O'Neal?
There is also Carter’s injuries for the past two consecutive years. It is reasonable. If I hadn't been merciful in my book, then Carter has actually been taken back by God at least 20% of his talent at this time, okay? However, in reality, Carter, at this stage, has not played so many games. In addition, the plot of the footsteps, from the perspective of Popovich's personality, his act of revenge is just my design to fit his personality.
After all, basketball texts are also real friends. I can't change their personal settings on purpose just because of some of my own personal goods and preference for someone?
In fact, even to this day, the personalities used by Kobe, McGrady, Iverson, and others are also the ones I have obtained from studying their biographies and experiences in their reality.
Moreover, winning the championship without injury is not called deliberate, and not winning if you encounter some accidents is called deliberate... Then what kind of plot is called undeliberate?
And this point, from the subscription, the feedback from many big guys to me is obvious. That is, after these two seasons, readers who have been reading it down and prefer a reasonable style have begun to believe that I will fully explain Su Feng's 20-season career.
In addition, let’s go back to the answer of an apprentice who said that I repeated the plot for two consecutive seasons... To be reasonable, I didn’t want to answer this question at first, because when I saw his comment, I was very happy, so I decided to answer. So why is Qiao so happy?
Because... the comment he posted yesterday, when I saw it today, not only did not have a like, but there are even a bunch of readers who patiently pointed out the important content of the two seasons below, but because there are some replies below It involved a personal attack, so in order to protect the face of this child's shoes, Qiao simply deleted the building and answered him here.
First of all, structurally speaking, these two seasons need to serve the big plot of the summer of 2003, so as long as you read the plots of these two seasons carefully, you will find that these two seasons, Qiao revealed the word growth between the lines.
Su Feng is growing, as he is defeated, his mentality is growing, his skills are growing, his strength and his ability to become stronger and stronger on the court, and these, through three consecutive 60+, through three quarters 60+, through a single section 30+, I have done a lot of fine writing, and because I am afraid that some readers will think it is too crooked, I also made various GIF pictures (currently, only the starting APP can see the GIF pictures) .
In addition, Su Feng’s opponents are also growing... such as McGrady’s growth, Kobe’s relationship with O’Neal, Kidd’s negative emotions, and then you give me a sentence, I have been in water for two seasons? Wake up, if I have been in the water for two seasons, why don't I just win the championship in these two seasons, and then just finish it on the spot?
And now at the starting point, as long as the author dares to water, the most intuitive reaction is to decline in subscription.
But it is true that the subscriptions that fell due to various conditions during the two consecutive championships have risen back after the end of the two seasons. So, now that you know the truth, are you very angry? Do you think you failed to disgust me and my readers through the embarrassment, you think you are very angry?
pissed off? That's right!
Because as long as the readers who have finished reading the iron, they know that it is precisely these two untitled seasons. Qiao has made a lot of serious preparations for the upcoming plot, and various foreshadowings one by one.
And these were taken by you as a repetitive plot that lasted two consecutive seasons. You said that after reading this part of the content carefully and feeling good, and writing it carefully, you feel that you can at least give yourself 6 points. In terms of how we feel?
Skip these two seasons? How will the trouble continue in the future? How did McGrady grow up in the sun? How did Xiao Yao and AI establish a revolutionary friendship after repeated defeats? The stories of these players in this era, and Su Feng's choice in the summer of 2003, and how should James and others who are stronger than the same period in the previous life appear?
One last thing, these two seasons are to avoid water, I will skip a lot of games that do not need to be described in detail. Even the total number of words in the two seasons is currently only 200,000. Basically, they are still serving the plot. So do you know why there were so many readers and children's shoes downstairs at that time? This apprentice little friend?
well, let's get back to business.
Here comes another new question. Why did Qiao arrange for Su Feng to end these two seasons in a lonely hero after two consecutive championships?
First of all, we have to start with arranging for Su Feng and Jordan to win the championship.
Because Su Feng's first crown was won with Jordan, Qiao must arrange for him to win his second crown.
Yes, that's right, if you really say deliberately, then in my outline, Su Feng's second crown is Qiao deliberately.
Because from the perspective of writing, the rhythm of crown, lose, crown and lose will be better, and it will be more conducive to spreading. But the way to write crown, crown, lose, and lose is not only difficult, but also tests the writing ability and plot layout skills. In short, in the design of this plot, I chose to take detours and directly gave myself There is a difficulty BUFF.
However, because Su Feng won the first championship with Jordan, he would have to win the championship in the second year. Otherwise, people would say that Su Feng also held Jordan's thigh to win the championship. And at this point, in public opinion, I believe that reasonable readers should be clearer than me?
Therefore, after two consecutive championships, how to hone Su Feng's mentality and make him appear with a relatively mature mentality when he goes to the next team is what I need to arrange for these two seasons.
At this point, at least for the time being, the book of Ironing is a further step forward in his 20 seasons.
Because as I said, as the story of the iron-strike unfolds, many readers' concerns have long changed from the so-called championship not winning, to what kind of ending the stars of this era will have under the pressure of Su Feng.
Fighting Iron has changed from a simple star crooked book to a group image crooked book.
The emergence of each new character and the linkage between each old person in the future is the key to the book "Strengthening" that can be written to the present and still be read.
And this is also the experience and lessons that I have improved since the plug-in.
That is, I can't just copy the plug-in routines to strike iron, right? To put it bluntly, if your author does not improve, then readers will improve. It's not even nice to say that as the number of reasonable and handsome readers increases, if you don't make progress, the readers will be over.
Therefore, after the plots of these two seasons are fully explained, the next big linkage in the summer of 2003 has been formed.
And then, Qiao only needs to patiently push the plot, so that the iron can be safely transferred to the third part of this book.
That is, those things XXXX that year.
In short, seek common ground while reserving differences, if you choose to skip a lot of plots and then blame each of my plots, then you will definitely feel all kinds of unreasonable. Because of the interlocking plots, if you miss any paragraph, you will lose control of rationality.
And after unfolding with a relatively reasonable description and Su Feng’s plot, for Su Feng’s next career... just like I said before, the plot that you guessed can be called Is the plot?
You can all guess which season Su Feng won the championship, which season Su Feng established the dynasty, how did Qiao bring you suspense?
It’s no exaggeration to say okay...As of now, Qiao’s meticulously designed chaos universe, before Su Feng mails me the next plot, to be honest, I don’t know how it will be. development of.
Because ironing is no longer just written for the sake of breaking records and winning the championship. I said, it is a complete universe, it is a complete plane. In this plane of Su Feng, these characters and Su Feng's plot have slowly become its soul.
And this is the basketball essay Qiao wants to write, a basketball essay that can completely block all my roads and the road next door.
Although, in writing books, I can improve in many ways. But to be honest, in terms of plot layout, ironing is likely to be the only one in my basketball writing career.
Because this is a basketball article that I racked my brains, and the materials alone have 35 Gs (there are more videos) to carry out the layout of a basketball article.
In order to write this book well, I checked a lot of materials and literature, and read countless biographies and resumes of major stars.
Then it is presented in front of you through re-creation.
Fighting Iron is definitely not the best and coolest basketball article, but it must be written quietly. UU Reading www.uukanshu.com has written his own best basketball article.
Therefore, before the summer of 2003...
The friends who want to bet hurry up. Otherwise, Zhuge Liang said afterwards that you guessed it correctly, that Qiao and the other reader bosses would not admit it!
Well, once again thank you handsome and reasonable genuine masters for giving Qiao confidence, because it is your reasonableness that gave Qiao the motivation to create such a crooked basketball essay.
At the same time, your patience has made me look forward to Su Feng's next career.
When we wait for the update tomorrow, let's pick up the book and get back to business.
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