: "Borrow" for half a day. In addition, some people want to know what the original 5 irons are...
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I Really Just Want to Hit the Iron (All I Really Want Is To Play Basketball)
- Write Quietly
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- 2022-01-03 11:11:58
Absolutely, I chatted with a fellow author yesterday. He said that he wrote a total of 60,000 words at 4K every day this month, and he worries about full attendance every day. Then I replied to him, I wrote nearly 90,000 this month, but I don't have to worry about full attendance. (Because I voted at the beginning of the month, I didn't expect it!)
Okay, let's talk about business.
Let's brazenly borrow a half-day to finish this story!
Then.......
Although I have said it many times, let’s talk about it again... At the closing stage, Qiao was not deliberately making excuses, but when I wrote the following article, because there are many places in the previous article, I have to go back and review it myself. Once again, plus more than ten hours of "turtle" every day, not only the body cannot withstand it, but it is also a test for the mental strength and the physical strength of the elderly. Therefore, Qiao can only guarantee that, on the premise that the total number of words per month before the end of the book is not stretched, the whole paragraph, the whole story of the story will be completed as much as possible, so that when you open the latest chapter, it will not be Uncomfortable because of broken chapters and update speed.
Then, I will chat with you to finish the previous outline plan and the original five-part outline for ironing.
As I said before, the total word count for ironing will probably be around 5 million words.
Therefore, in terms of the progress of the total word count, 90% of the iron strike has been completed.
And in this final plot, the sentence is still the same, I will only pick the key points to write. Therefore, if there are several chapters in a row or if there is a period of time not to write the game, it is actually not difficult to guess based on my writing style. It must be because I have to leave the pen and ink for the main events.
After all, it was hard to bring back the suspense of the championship before the end of the book, so the proportion of the playoffs must be 7 or even 8, and the regular season only deserves 3 or 2.
In addition....... After writing the last one, I can also open my heart to talk about the original five-part outline of iron-strengthening.
In fact, in Qiao’s original iron-strike plan in 19 years, the five iron-struck parts were Philadelphia's Fledgling, the Rise of the North, the Southern Crossing, the Arrival of the King, and the Return of Veterans.
According to the original assumption, after the digital human plot ended, Su Feng would only stay in the Raptors for one season.
That is to say, after winning the championship with the help of boss Joe, through a reasonable plot deduction, the Raptors disintegrated directly, and Su Feng switched to the Heat.
Then the next step is for the Lakers to take two consecutive games, and Su Feng ends the story of the Lakers' last consecutive game under questionable circumstances.
Yes... In the original idea, O'Neal would not be in the same team with Su Feng.
Because if the Heat were a direct competitor for the Lakers at the beginning of the century, it would be impossible for Old Buss to agree to put O'Neal to the Heat.
So the next thing is for the Lakers to keep O'Neal, form a gang, and continue with the Heat.
During the Southern Tribulation, I didn't plan to let Su Feng establish a dynasty in Miami at first.
Instead, they won the championship in 2002 and 2004, and in 2003, the Celtics won the championship under the leadership of Xiao Deng.
For one thing, in my conception, this way of writing can keep the championship suspense all the time. Secondly, it will not fall into exhaustion when entering the mid-term.
But the problem with this way of writing is...
At the beginning of the 20th year, there was an accident that I can't believe until today.
According to the original outline, Kobe will be beaten as Su Feng’s competitor until the fifth part...
So if it weren't for that kind of thing, it's okay. After all, I believe that the mentality of Real Komi has long been tempered by this group of excellent starting jokes.
But after this file was out... plus the various backstabs of the basketball essay in the back, I had to change the outline before opening the book.
But I can tell you a little bit. After all, as readers, I think you can also regard this as another story that happened in the time and space of iron-fighting.
After winning the championship in 02 and 2004, in the original outline, Su Feng will leave the Heat and Garnett in 2005 to join forces in Portland.
Yes... Yes, in my original outline, as a wolf honey... Garnett was the second master of Su Feng's establishment of the dynasty.
Although Qiao knows that many people don’t like Garnett, I have mentioned it many times in my book. In fact, anyone who knows Garnett knows that this product has always been "bullying and fearing hardship", especially when meeting Yao Ming. If he catches Yao Ming, he blows.
Because as a human spirit, Garnett's double quotient is definitely far higher than Joe's boss.
He knows what the Chinese market behind Su Feng and Yao Ming means, and what it means to join forces with Su Feng.
So in the three years of 05, 06, and 07, I originally arranged for Su Feng to win three consecutive championships with Garnett in Portland.
Then because of the complete loss of interest in basketball after three consecutive championships, with Paul Allen no longer involved, Su Feng's next departure, and in accordance with the timeline, it is logical for the Celtics to comfort Auerbach's victory in the Spirit of Heaven. .
At this point in the plot, the arrival of the king in the fourth part is actually only half of the end.
Because in the original outline, Su Feng will join the Hornets who still have Paul in charge.
And why did you choose New Orleans and the Hornets?
The answer is of course...
In the original syllabus, Su Feng is going to pick this kind of team that has never won a championship and has a unique meaning to compete for the championship.
As we all know, after the hurricane hit, the league has been trying to compensate New Orleans, so as one of my favorite players, in the original plot, Su Feng and Paul will join hands to challenge the championship.
It's a pity, because you can always trust Chris-I can't at the critical moment.
So the original plot of O'Neal and Carter being injured for two consecutive years, I intend to leave it to Paul.
In addition, Yao Ming and Iverson's championships will also be placed in 2009.
And because Iverson is no longer at the peak, the MVP of the Finals will naturally be issued to Xiao Yao.
In addition, after winning the championship at the age of 34, Iverson will also announce his retirement at the Digital Man's championship ceremony.
Then, 10 years later, after I triggered the passivity of getting injured once and for all in the Western Finals, the old driver will play the fairy tale of winning the championship two years in advance in the iron.
Then, in the three years of 11, 12, and 13, Su Feng opened up the story of Paul's triple crown.
And it's not difficult to see here...
Until 13 years, Kobe will always play a role in my book that is full of confidence before the start, full of sadness during the season, and unwilling after the end of the season.
When I wrote the plug-in, I said that I would write a book specifically to complain about Kobe.
Because just like before, I wrote that Kobe used handsome techniques and fake moves to deceive a few fouls. Some readers came out and said that Kobe should be a tenacious and unyielding fighter who disdain to commit fouls. What happened to the writer of Kobe? ......To be honest, I feel that those who say this really don't know Kobe at all.
Also, don't make any comments about Kobe's criticism of Harden, because don't you know that Kobe also praised Harden for playing smart and supported him to win the MVP?
As a matter of fact, human nature itself is complex, so in the original syllabus, what I wanted to write was a dagger that had been fighting all the way for more than ten years, but had been miserable until 13 years.
Anyway, in the real world, no one can change Kobe's five championships.
So if there is no such thing, then I believe that Comey will only smile more happily while watching the iron.
Then comes the last one.
Ok.......
Many people may not know that before the senior executives of Digital Humans got sick and asked a dead person to become the general manager, the management of previous generations of Digital Humans had always attached great importance to the Chinese market.
Moreover, this is also the reason why digital humans were chosen in the beginning.
Because Philadelphia not only has a special meaning for Kobe.
At the same time, as a team that is rarely written as a home team in sports literature, before the digital man executives fell ill, I am not exaggerating to say that their friendliness to Chinese fans once made me fantasize. People come to do one-to-one ironing, which will become a lore in my basketball career.
Yes, that's right.
In the last part of the original Ironman, Kobe will leave the Lakers and play the last four consecutive games with Su Feng in the Digital Man.
But the problem with this writing is...
If there is no such accident, there is no problem with writing this way.
But as the accident happened, even if Philadelphia has a very special meaning for Kobe, I believe that no Komei would want to see Kobe wearing other team jerseys in any crooked story.
Therefore, this is why I told you before that, in the revised outline of the iron, I never considered Su Feng to return to Philadelphia.
Because Su Feng returned to Philadelphia, he must go back with Kobe to make sense.
Finally, let's talk a little digression.
Recently, some readers are giving me feedback that I feel that ironing has become aesthetically fatigued.
Hmm... how to put it...
This Qiao is very helpless, and at the same time true, there is really no way to change it.
Because let alone a 4.5 million-word novel, there will inevitably be repeated plots. As for the quality of the second half of the ironing, as I said, you can select a few chapters individually and compare them with the previous ones to see if there are any changes in the style of writing and the intensity of water injection.
To put it bluntly, the quality of iron strikes has always been there.
It's just that in Qiao's original vision, I will use an update speed comparable to that of an eagle to bring this aesthetic fatigue, but because the update speed cannot keep up, the aesthetic fatigue naturally appears.
In fact, when I was writing in the later stage of the fight, I also found that sports writing is not suitable for writing such a 5-million-word long article.
It's not that I don't have enough skill, and the water is less than 5 million words.
It's just that, on the premise of maintaining suspense and readers' passion for chasing the book, the ideal length of sports text is about 3 million words, and then rewrite 4-5 seasons.
Because it is different from reality, it is well known that once the protagonist in the novel is invincible, there will be aesthetic fatigue~EbookFREE.me~ But in reality, if your favorite star is as invincible as Su Feng, then I am afraid that you will not lose it. Chasing him every game.
And the most important thing is...
As you all know, the collaboration between Gouba and the major sports brands caused the sneaker-related plots I originally prepared to be cut.
Originally, before I wrote about ironing, I also specially researched and learned about the relevant content of the sneakers of NBA stars.
Qiao believes that when reading the previous article, some readers must have seen a lot of cold knowledge that he has never understood.
It's a pity, because I was stabbed by reality again.
So this also led to a very important refreshing point in the later stage of the iron strike, which was completely gone.
Therefore, it is not Qiao complaining here.
But it's not just Chinese basketball that is overcoming difficulties.
This group of people who are constantly being stabbed by reality are also thinking of various ways to write basketball articles for you in different ways.
Perhaps, the current NBA is very disheartening.
And, if it's not for professional needs, I don't want to watch it either.
But still that sentence.
In any case, basketball and the NBA have brought us happy memories.
so.......
Rather than say that I want to write down Su Feng's career in full, I want to say that I want to recall once again the NBA that I have watched in those years.
In short, it is a pity that the original five parts of Iron Strike failed to be written in accordance with the original plan.
But from my personal point of view, I am very satisfied with the five new irons.
Because of different plot reasoning, it also brings different plots and different joys.
Okay, let's go on to the turtle chapter!
Chatting with you guys at least caused me to write less than 3K words!
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