Chapter 414: Mr. Bae shouldn't avenge it, right?

At the same time, a group of horses are watching Cui Geng's new book.
Although Ma Yi is now the CEO of Finish Chinese. He should be concerned about the new books as editors and editors, but now it is just during the Chinese New Year. He is idle at home.
For the author Cui Geng, a group of horses has long heard of it and knows his "bad spots".
Alas, Cui Geng is talented no matter how he says it.
怎么 A talented and diligent author is no better than a talented and diligent author.
After all, web writing is a creative industry. A lot of the time, it's not about how fast you write, but how well you write.
Content is not good, no matter how fast you write it is just accelerating the production of garbage.
蝴蝶 "Butterfly Game" has just opened a book not long, and the state of the comment area is obviously not much better.
The pack of horses ignored these and started reading directly.
The rhythm of the beginning is very fast. After taking the identity of the protagonist in one stroke, he got the gold finger directly. After briefly introducing the use of the gold finger, he began to enter the official plot.
On the day of New Year's Eve, Cui Geng directly sent five chapters. These five chapters have already completed a small plot.
Starting with the protagonist's permission to "butterfly game", until helping the first supporting indie game maker complete the dream.
The content of the first small plot is very simple, which is equivalent to a preview of the core point.
穷 An indie game producer who was poor but never gave up on his dream, and made a game with simple materials and interesting gameplay, but no one was interested because he had no money to promote.
The protagonist found him when observing the parallel world, so he used his own authority to find a UP master in the game area, and used his golden finger to make this UP master "just happen" to download this game and play stand up.
As a result, the game suddenly went viral under the propaganda of the UP master. Since then, the game has been out of control, so the independent game producer can continue his dream.
After watching this small story, it was followed by a single chapter of Cui Gengfa.
The content of Single Chapter is very simple. On the one hand, I apologize to all readers because of the old book. On the other hand, I emphasize that the new book is well thought out and the content is absolutely wonderful. Please give me a little patience. During the New Year's period, he decided not to leave behind closed doors.
After reading these contents, a group of horses lost their thoughts.
He has been writing online novels for so long, and has been following the trends of online novels recently. Naturally, he can see some ways.
有 Is there any problem with this novel? there must be.
But there are advantages too!
At present, the novels on the market are mainly based on the routine of "mobble the young and the poor". The way to mobilize readers' emotions is mainly through simpler and crude methods such as depression, incitement to hatred and revenge.
The urban novel also has a good development, but the whole has not escaped from this big frame. Many soldiers, school flowers, rebirth themes, and the refreshing point are basically more traditional pretense.
蝴蝶 The novel "Butterfly Game" can be seen from the underlying architecture, which is very different from the current popular novels.
First of all, it re-planned the previous routines while maintaining a fast pace.
所谓 The so-called "Golden Chapters" are still popular in most novels today, that is, the fixed cycle of "suppressing, getting golden fingers, and beating the face."
不能 This routine can't be said to be bad, but it is a tendency to be used badly. Many readers are instinctively nauseous after seeing it.
蝴蝶 "Butterfly Game" completely gave up this way. In the beginning, there was no repressive part. The protagonist directly won the gold finger, and there was no plot of "face", and he went directly into his own unique cool point.
Secondly, the expression of "Shuang" in this novel is completely different from other novels.
The current online novel is "Simple and Ruthless", which is also commonly known as "Pretend to beat the face".
But the cool point of "Butterfly Game" is a sneaky coolness. The protagonist uses the light ball in his hand to create a butterfly effect in the parallel world with some tiny changes, thus achieving some very interesting results.
The refreshing feeling obtained by the protagonist is not as obvious as the traditional pretense to hit the face, and it will be more subtle, but this refreshing feeling can also bring spiritual joy to the reader.
Moreover, aside from the sense of achievement achieved by the protagonist, if you substitute yourself in the book's character, such as the unwilling game producer, you can also get a kind of happiness.
快乐 This happiness is a bit like an adult's fairy tale. Everyone knows that most indie game producers make a game that is dead because of lack of publicity.
In reality, many independent game producers can only give up their game dreams unwillingly, but in the novel, his dream is realized because of the "butterfly effect" created by the protagonist, which is also a refreshing feeling for readers .
If the popular novel practice is braised pork, then this novel is like a simple sugar mixed tomato.
Braised pork is delicious, but when all kinds of braised pork are on the table, a sugar mixed tomato will be served and it will be burned out soon.
Not only that, but a group of horses seemed to be in this book and saw some shadows of Tenda.
感觉 He felt that the story seemed to be taken from President Pei. After all, when President Pei was doing "The Lonely Desert Highway", it was suddenly red because of a video of Mr. Qiao.
With the proceeds of this game, President Pei had enough money to make "Ghost General", and only earned the first bucket of gold to form the Tengda Group.
Therefore, this story is particularly kind to the horses.
From these considerations, the Ma group has a hunch. If this book can be written well, it will definitely be a big hit at the end of the Chinese website!
But is this book written perfectly?
The horses felt that was not the case.
There are some places where you can make small changes. After the changes, this book can be taken to the next level!
Just right, while Cui Geng has n’t written much yet, Chuan Xiao turned around and hurry up to modify it!
I thought of this, and a group of horses called Cui Geng directly.
"Mr. Ma, I'm just coding! You can rest assured that I will definitely write this book well, and it won't anymore! At least two million words!"
The pack of horses have not spoken yet, and Cui Geng's side has begun to express his determination.
"Oh, guess how many times have you said this?"
A word from a group of horses made Cui Geng dumb.
"Well, I didn't say this when I called you." A group of horses smiled and went to the topic, "I really want to talk to you about the new book, but I told you to write this book well and not to end it There are other things besides this. "
Cui Gengyi 愣: "General Manager Ma, please tell me."
A group of horses said, "I personally have some small opinions, and I will simply tell you, if you think it is appropriate, change it, even if it is not appropriate, it can be regarded as a group effort and work hard to write this book well."
"I'm very optimistic about your book, so I want to help you better polish the content of this book."
Cui Geng was somewhat flattered: "You said."
A group of horses sorted out their thoughts a bit and elaborated their thoughts in detail.
"I can see that the subject matter of the first small plot seems to be based on President Pei. Tengda does have a lot of interesting stories, and it is not bad to use materials for it, but I think that the art processing you performed is still not enough."
"My opinion is mainly two points:"
首先 "First of all, I think the protagonist, as a pure spectator, is not enough involved in the plot."
"It's not a big deal to think of the protagonist as a pure tool person. Some books do it, but it will be more interesting if it can be related to the plot."
"I conceived this way: The light ball received by the protagonist is not a parallel world, but the real world in which he is."
"Every act of the protagonist is actually changing the world and making the world better."
"At the same time, the protagonist can also benefit from his actions. For example, he helped an entrepreneur build a 100 billion-level business empire, and the protagonist can use his own money to buy this company before the empire takes shape. He ’s made huge gains and changed his life. "
"Moreover, as the protagonist participates in these interactions as a dark person, he can meet those supporting characters in reality, and at this time, there will be many interesting plots."
"Secondly, I think the tone of this book can be changed."
"The current writing is mainly a positive narrative, which is more straightforward."
"The so-called direct refreshment is: what I want to do, I do, I succeed."
"This writing is certainly safe, but it may not be very attractive to readers."
"I think it's possible to use an anti-routine narrative method to further strengthen the sense of yin and yang in the" butterfly game ", make the cool point more tortuous, and the storyline more humorous ~ EbookFREE.me ~ simple That said: I didn't want to do anything, there was an accident, I didn't do what I wanted, but I succeeded. "
"Specifically to the first plot you wrote, the current refreshing summary is: the independent game author wants to succeed, the protagonist helps him through the 'butterfly game', and the independent game author succeeds."
"After the modification, the cool point can be changed as follows: the independent game author did not want to succeed, he just wanted to be a game of revenge on the society. The protagonist found this game very interesting. He helped him with the" butterfly game ", and then the independent game author It worked. "
"In the process of writing, pay attention to using some witty and humorous writing, this plot should be able to stand out from the current traditional plot."
"Understand?"
那 On the other end of the phone, Cui Geng was silent, seemingly trying to digest what the group of horses just said.
It took him a long time before he meaningfully said "um": "Mr. Ma makes sense!"
确实 "Indeed, when I write this, I always feel like I'm missing something."
"It's like a dish, the ingredients are all there, and the heat is almost the same, but it's always missing that flavor!"
"If you can make up these two points, this book will definitely be even better!"
不过 "But ... Mr. Ma, I have a doubt."
A group of horses: "Well? What doubts?"
Cui Geng hesitated before he said, "To be honest, the plot of this game producer is indeed taken from President Pei."
"But, isn't this writing a disgrace to the image of President Pei?"
"Isn't President Pei going to avenge me?"