: About 1 detail! (Interim announcement, deleted in the afternoon)
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My Senior Brother is Too Steady
- Go back to business
- 583 characters
- 2021-03-02 10:46:10
PS: Because readers in the last chapter reported that the protagonist’s reason for going out in the second stage is not sufficient, but he went out in a volume without doing anything, detrimental to Emperor Gou’s name.
After careful consideration, the author quickly confessed to the readers on his knees, and revised some of the details, and explain it slightly here.
The previous chapter (Chapter 33) was actually written with implied techniques, and carried out several minor foreshadowings, such as'Drinking seven or eight times','The protagonist also relaxed the mind and epiphany when drinking once, all implying that the protagonist has already Acquainted with the wine.
From the character revealed by the former Jiuwu, Jiuwu is a non-morbid and cautious person, but he is also a lively person, facing Jiu Jiu as an old father.
Under this circumstance, the male host refused once in the face of inaction, Jiuwu launched the skill'bitter mouth', according to Emperor Li's emotional quotient, and already understood that if he refused the second time, Jiuwu would certainly initiate the skill'coercion and temptation ', so he didn't let the conversation continue.
But some readers relentlessly pointed out that they felt that there was not enough reason for the temptation of ‘Wuweijing’, and the protagonist was not careful.
The author was awake and sat on the toilet and scratched his belly. After careful thinking, he still gave up the hidden details, clarified the matter, and revised the details of the dialogue, added the coercion, and changed the chapter name.
Do not allow readers to spend their brain cells to hold the phone silly, this is the unswerving pursuit of the author!
is the author's inadequate treatment details, and I apologize.
(Actually, it was written two days ago, and checked once or twice before release. The mind plots all the plots behind...)
In addition, the performance trend of this new book is not bad. You guys voted to speak very positively, so that the author is deeply gratified and his enthusiasm for creation is high.
But please don't go to the author's book Shuang Shuangkai to say "Don't write this old book", it sounds very sad.
The first sword next door is a narration-oriented ‘slow’ cultivating immortal essay. This is a story-oriented ‘light’ cultivating immortal essay. The two styles are completely different, and it is also the fun of the author as a creator to create works of different styles.
The palm of the hand and the back of the hand are all meat. The author's writing plan cannot be easily changed.
Even at the expense of all holidays (there is no original), the author will strive to maintain a stable update.
Different stages of works have different degrees of defects, which is inevitable. After all, the author is also a young man who is just 20 years old and 90 months old, and is learning (hand) dreaming (refining) in his own literature (touch) I want to continue to advance!
Bow to thank the readers for their support. More than half a month after the publication of the new book has passed 100,000 words, it is the biggest reward to get everyone's like.
Of course, don’t forget to vote collection, plus a little push the book to friends and relatives~
(In order not to affect the subsequent readers' reading feeling, this announcement will be deleted after six hours, which will shock everyone.
Such as ‘yeah, this author adds more! ’
‘Lying trough, I’ll show you this when I click in? 'Wait
I'm really sorry, I apologize again. )