Chapter 267: Teach you how to water!

Putting away the mess of thoughts, Li Zexuan began to read the news seriously.
Of course, it is undeniable that the headline of Li Yu’s news was very good. Compared with the later dynasties, the folk customs of the Tang Dynasty were more open. The folks liked to hear the love stories of these men and women, gifted men and beautiful women. With this title alone, Li Yu can attract people to continue reading.
After a while, Li Zexuan finished reading the first news. He nodded, and then shook his head. Li Yuben came to see Li Zexuan and nodded, but he still looked happy, but Li Zexuan shook his head again, and Li Yu's face was not broken. Suddenly, his smile froze.
"Uh, boss, what do you think? Why do you nod your head for a while and shake your head for a while?"
Li Yu asked aloud.
Li Zexuan glanced at Li Yu and said, "I nod, because I think the headline of your news is very good, and the content is not bad!"
"Not bad? The owner just thinks I can write better content?"
Li Yu immediately found the crux of the problem from the two adjectives used by Li Zexuan.
"Hey, smart!"
Li Zexuan exclaimed, and then explained: "It is undeniable that the story you chose, Xiao Yuer, is very attractive, and the story is fairly clear, but in my opinion, this is not enough."
Li Yu heard the words and cast a curious look at Li Zexuan. Li Zexuan smiled and walked towards the pavilion with Li Yu and said as he walked:
"Hehe, Xiao Yu'er, don't be convinced. There are reasons why I say this. First of all, the whole story of your news gives people a feeling of joking. Your description of the incident is very general, broad and boring. , This directly leads to the lack of substitution in your entire story. You have a good subject, but you have not described a complete story with full characters and emotions. Readers will only read it with the same taste."
Li Yu held the stone table and mumbled depressedly, "Is it so bad?"
Li Zexuan sat down and said with a chuckle: "It's not that bad. The reason why I told you so much today is for your own good. Of course, to be more precise, I want you to make more money. Do you want to listen?"
"Want to hear and want to hear! Hurry up, boss!"
Hearing the money, Li Yu instantly became interested, and the depression that had just been hit by Li Zexuan was wiped out.
"Hehe, you girl!"
Li Zexuan laughed and said: "On your subject, let me write. I can write at least 30,000 or 40,000 characters, and I can serialize it in the newspaper for five or six issues. You see, the rich son Mo Wuqian and the farmer girl Shu Yinglian met this period. , You can describe more about Shu Yinglian when she was at home and was bullied by the village tyrant. She was desperate and helpless, and how shocked Mo Wuque was when she saw Shu Yinglian's peerless appearance.
Of course the most important thing is that the part of Mo Wuwei who stood up to save Shu Yinglian must be described in detail. How can you finish writing such an important scene in two sentences? The foreshadowing in front of you is all for the sake of this place where you can pretend to be forced to slap your face, ah yeah, it is the heroes who are preparing to save the beauty!
There is also, Mo Wuque’s father, when Mo Yunshan opposed his son’s relationship with Shu Yinglian, why did you not write about the contradictions, self-blame, and helplessness of Mo Wuwei at the time? Shu Yinglian couldn't be with her beloved, and jumped into the river in anger. Why don't you put yourself in and think about Shu Yinglian's despair, perseverance, and tragic? This place can poke the tears of readers the most! You have to describe it well.
In addition, after Mo Wuwei learned that his beloved person jumped into the river, his loneliness, sadness, and anger, and eventually grief, went to the temple and shaved his hair as a monk. You must also focus on this place. Rendering, these are all words, all money! As a reporter, if you don’t know how to count words, bah, if you don’t write about one thing, you won’t make much money..."
Li Zexuan talked to Li Yu about how to fill the news and how to write a piece of news as five pieces of news. This guy completely forgot that he was the boss of "Datang Daily" and Li Yu wanted to do that. But the pit was his own money.
Li Yu was aside, she was dumbfounded. She was really going to kneel for Li Zexuan. How can the boss personally teach employees how to find ways to cheat the boss's money! In addition, the "irrigation" Li Zexuan gave her, ah, is a way to unfold the plot, it really opened her eyes, as if the door to a new world (the road of the water god) was slowly opening to her.
"Ahem!"
There was a soft cough next to him. It turned out to be Ma Zhou. He just came out to breathe. He didn't expect to meet Li Zexuan who was "teaching" Li Yu. The more he listened, the more he felt wrong, and he quickly interrupted.
"Um, Brother Ma, are you here?"
Looking at Ma Zhou's expression, Li Zexuan knew that he had heard the words he had just said, and his expression was a bit embarrassed for a while.
"Hello, Uncle Ma~!"
Li Yu remembered what Li Zexuan had told her before, "If you have anything to do, your Uncle Ma can still give you a care", and she yelled sweetly.
"Damn~! When did I become an uncle? Yesterday he still called me to be a steward!"
Ma Zhou had just walked two steps ~EbookFREE.me~ Hearing Li Yu's words, he suddenly stumbled. If Li Zexuan hadn't reacted quickly, he raised his hand and estimated that he would fall into a dog feces.
"What's the matter? Isn't the little girl called the right one? Brother Ma, why are you such a big reaction?"
Li Zexuan teased with a smirk.
Ma Zhouyi was speechless, what else could he say, he could only secretly scold Li Zexuan for teaching bad children. He was sure that this must have been taught by Li Zexuan to Li Yu.
"Lord Sir Alex is here today, is there anything important?"
Ma Zhouping recovered his mood and asked.
"Um, don't worry, wait until I finish reading Xiao Yu'er's news, and I haven't read another one! Oh, brother Ma, you just came here, you can also see how Xiao Yu'er's news is written! "
Li Zexuan handed Ma Zhou the article he had just finished reading, "Rich slumber, but escaped into the empty door for his lover", and he picked up another news article and began to read it.
Ma Zhou had no choice but to be patient, sat down, and started watching the news.
"Fuck, fuck! This little girl is doing things!"
Li Zexuan almost screamed when he saw the second news headline. Without him, this headline is really too strong. It said: "A woman is out in the field and her clothes are stolen by a man... .."
Li Zexuan touched his nose. It seems that Li Yu is going to carry the title party to the end. Hey, I don't know if it is a blessing or a curse.
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Thank you for being so proud, half-hearted, destiny and lucky, the world is scorching, I love you, and the pseudo-you (brother is back!) for the reward!
Thank you for your luck, Wang Zhijian,..., the pseudo-you change, Zhenzhen, there is always a monthly pass that the people want to harm me!
(End of this chapter)