: Some structure
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Plague Doctor
- Wallee The Robot
- 166 characters
- 2021-03-02 03:47:44
Is like this, there is no change in the content, the main modification is a small writing structure.
It was something that the Devil Hunter Squad had brought into the Yung Shu Cave, why not bring heavy weapons, why different gun combinations, etc.
Originally in the current version, Wali ’s idea is not to write so much at the beginning, but tell it a little bit as the story goes on.
But now the effect is not very satisfactory. I did n’t write it clearly in the front, but the continuous explanation later affects the rhythm and is repetitive.
After comprehensive consideration, for the sake of the quality and long-term consideration of the book, Wali decided to revise it and write it clearly and clearly before the Demon Hunter Squad enters the Banyan Cave. Just click a little bit later. So today I'm even more grumbling, but three thousand words is not bad, everyone forgive me.
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