Chapter 57: Change script

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Like "Journey to the West", "Dream of Red Mansions" has only one camera for a long time. The filming progress is extremely slow, about one episode a month.
In the later period, Ren Dahui went to borrow two more sets, slightly accelerated, and could shoot one and a half episodes a month.
The crew has been on for half a year, and according to the content of the script, it took at most 20%. Because the location is not easy, all kinds of birds such as wind and other clouds fly by.
Just like Xiangyun Zuimian Paeonia lactiflora, the crew went to the Peony Garden in Hangzhou Xishan Park in the first year and stepped on the flowering season in the second year. As a result, the year was cold, and many flowers were not opened.
In contrast, indoor drama is very easy to master.
Nearly a month later, Xu Feijin had witnessed classic scenes such as Dai Yu's coming into the house to see her mother, and Yuan Chun's return home, and she had thought of the show.
Then, it was Mr. Xu's turn.
The night in March was still very cold, a pot of water was burning on the stove, and the light bulb was swaying overhead, it was the wind squeezed in from the outside.
Xu Fei wrapped in a large cotton-padded jacket, his feet spread out to the fire by the stove, and he held a thick script.
He was very familiar with the entertainment industry in his last life, and he is no stranger to the operation of the crew. He is also very good at the acting genre, but he has not really filmed.
Since he hadn't tried it, he had to lower his posture and learn with humility. He had read the script countless times, and it was covered with dense markings.
The upcoming scene is about Jia's house being copied and a man being imprisoned. Jia Yun entrusted Ni Er's way and pretended to be a jailer came to visit the prison-the scene of the prison temple was taken in Taishan, and the cell was in the studio.
Among them, there are many places where he feels screwed up, such as this section:
"Jia Yun, dressed as a jailer, knelt in front of Baoyu and choked: Uncle!
Baoyu hugged Jia Yun: Why are you here?
Jia Yun stood up hurriedly, wiped her eyes, and pulled Baoyu to the table filled with wine and dishes: Uncle, please sit down!
Baoyu looked at Jia Yun in confusion and sat down slowly.
Jia Yunqing raised his glass and smiled strongly: Uncle, when I was at home, I often wanted to honor my uncle. I never had a chance. Today ...
He choked back again. "
Look at the screw? These two people are completely different, and the language logic is not close to each other! So he wrote a large paragraph beside him, preparing to communicate with the director.
Another example:
"Jia Yun: Uncle, rest assured! Although I haven't read any books, I still know the story of Shen Baoxu crying Qin Ting."
Shen Baoxu cried Qin Ting, Xu Fei didn't understand it. He went to investigate and learned that it was an allusion to "The Story of Spring and Autumn Zuozhuan".
Shen Baoxu was the doctor of the Chu Kingdom. In the fifteenth year of King Chu Zhao, Wu Zixu assisted Wu to break through the Chu Kingdom. Shen Baoxu went to the Qin Kingdom for help. Duke Qin Ai was undecided whether to send troops or not. Shen Baoxu cried Qin Ting for seven days and finally rescued King Zhao back to Chu.
It can be said that Xu Fei has studied the script thoroughly, but the more transparent it is, the more problems there are. He was thinking and aesthetic thirty years later. Looking at the logic of film and television characters in this era, he always felt a bit dumb.
"Ugh!"
He read and read, picked up the pen and added another sentence, couldn't help shaking his head, and pressed the recorder next to him.
Yes, who is Boss Xu? A big dog with hundreds of thousands of dollars, the recorder says buy it! And I bought it not for listening to songs, but for filming.
First read the lines by yourself, record them on the machine, and then replay them to hear what is wrong. Such repetition will naturally improve.
This trick was still learned from Qin Hailu. Well, this kid is only seven years old now ...
Talking about the actors of later generations, they are generally divided into three types:
The first is that reason is greater than sensibility, represented by Qin Hailu, Lao Duan, and Feng Yuanzheng.
The second kind is more emotional than rational. The younger brother, son Zhou, and Sun Honglei before participating in "Extreme Challenge" are the representatives.
The third type, blind performances, is represented by Yang Shoutian, Yang Tianbao, Baihuajushi and electric eel.
The so-called rational actors are all pure technical flow, and the desk work is extremely rich, which can eat the script the most thoroughly. It takes four months to make a film, and it may take three months to prepare.
When you get to the scene, you can see which scene and which scene, and you can perform it, and it is stable.
Strong control over the character, good at design, this design is not derogatory, it is a performance skill.
For example, in "White Deer Plains", Qin Hailu also acts as a performance director. Li Qin has a finger biting action. Qin Hailu lets her bite one by one. Finally, when you bite the little finger, the arc and posture are the best.
This is a design.
Although Xu Fei was very handsome, he asked himself that he had the spirit of Liang Ziqing and could not reach the point of being on the spot, so he had to do desk work.
"Guttering!"
"Guttering!"
The water has been boiling for a long time and has been calling.
He lifted the kettle, poured it into an enamel jar, and hugged it in his arms again, right as a hot water bottle, and walked out the door with the script in his hand.
At the next door, knock gently.
"Who?"
As soon as the door opened, Ouyang's fat face was exposed, and his expression was quite unexpected. "Teacher Xu, is there something wrong?"
"We filmed the two of us in two days. I want to ask the director for advice."
"Oh, then you will!"
Ouyang itself has baby faces, small tiger teeth, cute hanging, ready-made days and mixed in the girl pile, it seems more tender. He went back and put on a piece of clothing and ran to Wang Fulin's room together.
When Wang Fulin saw the two of them together, he knew that they had come to the play.
"Director Wang, did you bother you?"
"No, I haven't rested yet. You took the photos the day after tomorrow. How are you preparing?"
"It's been right several times. Isn't this a treat?"
"Oh, let's take a look."
Xu Feisui pointed to the script, Ouyang nodded, and had been ranked once before.
The two pulled slightly apart, Xu Fei turned his back to the front, then touched the enamel jar from his arms, pretending to be food, and slowly placed it on the table.
Ouyang was puzzled and asked, "You are ..."
He turned around and called, "Uncle Bao!"
"Who are you?" Ouyang was more surprised.
"Uncle Bao, it's me!"
"Yun'er?"
"uncle!"
Xu Fei said that he would kneel and kneel, thumping his lower body, his voice choked.
"You, why are you here?"
Ouyang quickly picked him up.
Xu Fei stood up and pulled the other party to the table: "Uncle, please sit down!"
The two sat down.
Xu Fei said: "When I was at home, I often wanted to honor my uncle, but I never had a chance. Today ..."
Suddenly he paused, and the two were speechless.
Wang Fulin looked beside him, and he held his glasses in doubt, "The performance is quite good. Is there anything you don't understand?"
"..."
Of course Ouyang didn't, just looked at someone.
Someone turned his head, "Director, didn't you feel awkward?"
"After Jia Yun and Xiaohong returned the veil, they didn't play again. The book didn't introduce what he did later, and he didn't write it in the script. After such a long time, Jia Yun came up coldly and pretended to be fake. The jailer came to visit the prison, I think this process has to give the audience an explanation.
And you see, Bao Yuming asked, ‘how did you come here? ’
Jia Yun refused to answer, but asked him to sit, and then said, ‘when I was at home’, Yun Yun, obviously not answering the question, logically unreasonable.
People asked, at least I have to say, what am I doing now, when I heard that Jia's house was copied, I came to see you through the relationship. This is reasonable. "
"..."
Ouyang was a bit stunned, and was a little scared. Like Daiyu, Baochai, and Xiangyun, they were all honest children. The director would act as he pleased. There was no objection.
Wang Fulin was also startled, and then remembered that this kid helped to complete the Tanchun line!
And this sounds reasonable, he is an open-minded, he asked: "Is there anything else?"
"And here, Bao Yu recalled that Jia Yun sent him Bai Begonia, and also read Dai Yu's poems. You see Jia Yun's reaction," It seems to be infected, with tears flashing in his eyes. "
Jia Yun is empathetic, but it does not mean he is empathetic to everyone. He is a five-bedroom Jia family, living in poverty, but he knows about the gangs of Jiafu in Jiafu, what feelings can he have in it?
As for this poem, he may not have seen Lin Daiyu, and he said that he did n’t study much. As a result, when he heard the first poem, he would burst into tears ... This is a bit too much. "
"The entire scene of the Prison Temple is deliberately creating a sad atmosphere, but it is not in line with the character settings. Baoyu can be sad, why should Jia Yun be so sad that she shed tears when she kept moving?
There are only three places he should be sad, one talks about the status of Baoyu, one talks about the death of his mother, and one talks about the situation of Xiaohong.
I think this is the right way, which makes the world transparent and clear. "