: Volume 8 Summary
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This Swordsman is Too Steady
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- 2021-05-06 01:06:03
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【to sum up】
The eighth volume of Suppression is officially over.
Proposition Writing-The title is the frontispiece: I have an old friend who is holding a sword, and has not yet returned to the spring breeze.
Looking at the plot structure of this volume, I went down smoothly according to the outline.
So, this part is satisfactory.
Of course, some plots are not well written because of pen power problems.
This aspect can only continue to work hard.
Talk about the plot.
The development of the Huanlingzong line will definitely be one or two more layers than everyone thinks.
As for the line of "Holy Beast Lord", it can be said with confidence that no one has guessed it right so far, and there is not even one on the side.
Of course, this is also normal. After all, as far as the line of "Holy Beast" is concerned, the amount of information currently given in the article is still very small.
Regarding the plot behind.
There is a saying in the world of mercenaries, the first half of history is that the times make heroes, and the second half is that heroes dance with the times.
At present, this book is still in the stage of making heroes.
However, in the second half, I already have a rough plan, and I can’t wait to write out the plots that I have conceived.
The kind that is more anxious than all of you.
Because before I opened the book, most of the highlight plots that I conceived were actually concentrated in the second half, which is the section where heroes dance with the times.
But no matter how urgent it is, you can only take it slowly.
Because without these slow plots, those high-light plots are not high-lights.
The next volume is the ninth volume, [Sword Opens the Gate of Heaven]: The world says I love Chang'an, but in fact I only love a certain Chang'an.
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[Reply to some frequently asked questions and comments]
1. Water.
The comment section will say that there are generally two cases of water.
One is that it has little to do with the plot itself, but I just feel that some things are written in too much detail.
This part of saying "water" is a reasonable accusation.
For example, I wrote very concretely about why Yingjie is so obsessed with finding out the real murderer.
Some readers feel that there is no need to write, a bit watery.
Water?
There is indeed a point.
But is it necessary to write?
necessary.
In fact, I thought these points were quite clear at the beginning, so I don't need to write them specifically.
But the problem is that in the previous chapter, some people said (spraying) that they couldn't understand why Ying Jie had so much benefit, so why target Qing Ge? This behavior is too forceful to reduce intelligence.
This is by no means the first time this has happened.
So I thought about it and wrote this paragraph.
After all, a great like squid has to spend more time writing details in order to defensively (laughs).
The second kind of water is about the plot, and it usually happens in the foreshadowing of the plot.
Regarding this part of the allegations.
I don't accept it (righteously).
The meaningless sideline plot, even if you say water, but the plot and the emotional pavement must exist in my writing.
Although it may not be so exciting, it is absolutely essential.
For example, when the Tiancan Tudou teacher wrote that Xiaoyan went to Yunlanzong to fulfill the three-year agreement, it took a chapter for Xiaoyan to walk from the foot of the mountain to Yunlanzong.
I thought this chapter was the finishing touch, and really mobilized the emotions.
In the eyes of this part of the reader, this should be water.
I don't say who is right.
But this is what I wrote.
I will definitely write it my own way (proud).
My writing style should be regarded as the most traditional starting point.
The details are relatively detailed, and the plot rhythm is relatively "slow".
After all, there is no foreplay, how can there be an orgasm?
Of course, some guys will say that some people are young and vigorous, and there is an without foreplay, or foreplay only needs to be interesting.
I do not deny.
There is also this kind of text at the starting point now, and that is the Feilu text.
—The sign-in essays and survival essays on the list are of this type.
"Traveling, getting familiar with the world, understanding the exercises, starting to explore, encountering Xiaoyou, pretending to be forced, starting to slap face, summarizing the harvest, the next map begins to pave the way"
With this set, I need about forty or fifty chapters, but Feiluwen only needs three chapters.
Compare the pros and cons of the two writing styles.
Fei Lu Wenyou is intensively refreshing, and he can't stop at all when he is refreshed. In addition, he is in line with the habit of fragmented reading, and it can be refreshed in two or three chapters.
The bad thing is that there is no sense of immersion. After the refreshing, there is nothing left, and it is difficult to pick it up again.
I am not qualified to judge that kind of good writing style, and indeed each has its own advantages and disadvantages (and Feiluwen has been very popular recently.)
However, as far as I am concerned-it is cool alone and cannot meet my reading needs. This has led me to dislike reading Fei Lu Wen, and I have never read only the beginning article for more than a decade.
Therefore, I will only write that.
After all, what you write, you have to like it before you can write it.
2. Some criticisms.
It's not that you can't listen to criticism.
But a large part of the criticism comes from the reader's own failure to read carefully:
For example, Lu Qingshan obtained battle exploits and prepared to return to Yumen Pass to exchange his battle exploits into spirit crystals, and then was attacked by the chapter.
No less than three readers directly questioned that the plot was forcibly lowering wisdom-Lu Qingshan clearly had military exploits in him, so why not upgrade his rank and run away?
A large part of criticism is unnecessary criticism.
What does it mean that there is no need, that is, it is true. Yes, you are right, but there is no need for this.
For example, for example, Lu Qingshan's flying sword is very fast, and then after Lu Qingshan's sword, his opponent sighed: xxxxxx.
Some readers compared Feijian's speed with the speed of speech, and concluded that Feijian should have arrived before the opponent had finished speaking.
But in the article, Feijian arrived after the opponent sighed.
This is unreasonable.
Is this reader right?
Correct.
But is it necessary to entangle this?
I don't think it is necessary.
It's like Shiting's commentary in JOJO, just just smile.
There is also a part of the criticism that belongs to the self-braining + barring.
Just explain it a little bit if you can listen, if you don't want to listen, it's useless to vomit when you explain it.
The most obvious example is that in the setting of this book, soul search has many drawbacks, and the information obtained is only a very small part of the fragments and incomplete, so generally no one uses it.
Some readers just can't: Searching for souls in other novels is not set in this way, you just forcibly change the effect of soul searching, forcibly reducing wisdom, and authors!
Then I can't help it, right.
The last part of the criticism, um, how to put it, let's give an example directly.
Book Review 1: I have traveled to the real world. Those data and so on are really out of the picture, not real at all, just like a game.
Book Review 2: After writing, it is like Xianxia, it is not like a game at all. Are you still a game article?
The above book reviews are real book reviews, the specific wording is different, and the general idea has never changed.
Everyone should understand what I want to say.
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[About criticism]
Actually, I shouldn't have forced so much.
The predecessors said that it is best not to have any disputes with the readers.
However, after all, the author is also an individual, and a layman. After holding back for a long time, I always want to make complaints and hope to understand. (It's really much more fun after spitting out)
Of course, don't get me wrong, saying so much does not mean not accepting criticism.
On the contrary, I am willing to accept all reasonable opinions, and the more the better.
With constant feedback from readers, the author will continue to make progress.
This is a truth recognized by many authors.
-If there is no reader, in fact, even if you write a million words with your head covered, you will not make much progress.
Therefore, I really read every book review of everyone, and it is this way that I will be brooding and a little concerned.
In short, as long as you are a genuine reader, if you express your opinions or criticisms, I will change them if you have them, but if you don’t...
Even if I think it is your problem, as long as it is not a personal attack, I can accept it. This is a respect for everyone.
However, if you are just a trainee, you can speak, but you can only boast, and you can’t say anything else, otherwise it will be directly and permanently banned from the black package.
—No pirated readers think that I stole your food, and then come to teach you that your dish is not delicious, and it is delicious only if it is fried like this. This behavior is very great and worthy of praise, right?
Spray on pirated sites, don’t get me in the eye.
That's right, it's such a double standard. There are some things that genuine readers can say, but pirated readers can't say it.
【Subscribe for subscription】
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For genuine subscriptions, you can read this chapter and say that there are no ads.
Moreover, because I have the habit of correcting typos and polishing after posting the manuscript, there are often differences between the genuine content and the pirated version.
Typos are fine, but polishing can indeed increase the readability of a lot of the article.
Look at the original, isn't he fragrant?
Also, please order later.
You may like to collect many chapters and read them at once.
But, let's put it this way, what determines the author's income is the new subscription, but what affects the author's update speed and codeword passion is the retrospective subscription.
The more people order, the more motivated the author will be, at least I am.
The author needs positive feedback too much to promote the codeword passion.
Especially when writing two million words, it becomes more and more difficult to write, and these positive feedbacks are even more needed to increase enthusiasm.
Just like in the climax plot, there are so many people who urge changes, so I often add changes.
This is the effect of positive feedback.
In this case, thinking about it is actually quite reasonable.
Just like when reading a book, if the mathematics teacher likes you very much and praises you, you will instinctively spend more energy on mathematics and study mathematics more seriously.
That's the reason.
【Update】
Speaking of updates, the eighth volume update took 93 days, with a total of 45.2w words, an average of 4800 words per day.
It's not particularly awesome, but personally it's still very satisfying.
Because during this period, when I asked for leave, I said that I had to make up the owed change and I made up.
The important plots that have been said have been updated, and they have also been added for everyone.
The leader's five shifts have also been added.
Nothing in arrears.
It's like the feeling of paying off debts, very cool.
At the same time, it has also maintained a strong character-one spit and one nail, and I did it when I said it~
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But there is bad news.
First of all, there is no more today.
Because of the new volume, it will take a day to go through the outline. (Actually, the day can't be finished, just confirm the direction, and continue to revise the details later)
Secondly, good news for me.
I took the provincial exam last month and got my results. I was lucky enough to get in, and I was only two points away from the first place.
According to Brother Rongguang, it is: Now, the possibility of going ashore is before my eyes, and I must consider whether this will be the only opportunity in my life.
Therefore, UU has to fight for whatever it takes to read www.uukanshu.com.
Therefore, I enrolled in an interview cram school for eight days, from 5.4 to 5.12, from 8 in the morning to 10 in the evening.
Therefore, during this period of time, I can only try my best to update, but there is no guarantee of the amount, and it may even be interrupted.
—Time is indeed too tight, and it is really exhausting to go to class for a day. It is a very tiring thing, and there may not be three or four hours of mental and physical strength.
and so…
I can only ask you to be considerate.
Besides, no matter how difficult it is, it will only be difficult for a week or two~ (dog head)
Certainly some people do not want to be considerate.
Then I have to say sorry.
Because, to me, this opportunity is indeed much more important than the update.
Here, I would like to bow to everyone, and apologize in advance!
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[At the end]
Do you think there will be a character card?
not at all.
There are more than 3,000 words already written here.
So this time, Lu Qingshan's character card was broken.
Besides, in the next volume, Lu Qingshan's character card will soon have a big change~
Therefore, the character card that has been compiled now has no reference value.
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